You are on a ship coming to America. Suddenly some people board your ship. You don't know what to do! Yet these people don't seem dangerous. They are looking for something very, very strange. What do the people want? What happens? Finish the story. Be creative!
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You are on a ship coming to America. Suddenly some people board your ship. You don't know what to do! Yet these people don't seem dangerous. They are looking for something very, very strange. What do the people want? What happens? Finish the story. Be creative!
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michaelmcdonald
8/22/2011 06:24:58 am
They ask me for money.I say no.They say please.I say no and walk away.One dude falls down.I go to help him and he says back off.A woman pulls a gun on someone.Then she gets arrested.People cheer.One man goes to the snack bar asks for the leftover.They say no and gives it to the dog.I felt bad for him.Two men get in a fight.I break it up.One laty is crooss eyed.One person is blind.One girl is missing a arm.One man is missing teeth.Someone tries to take the boat hostage but they stop him.I will remember this forever.
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Nicholas Bidwell
8/22/2011 07:16:35 am
The mysterious people going on the ship appear to be friendly pirates. Looking for a hidden new nuclear weapon hidden on my boat. How I know all of this is because I have been following them. Right now I am writing in a journal just in case any thing happens on the boat. So far they have capture 10 hostages ,and if the caption does not tell them were the weapon is then they will start capturing more. The caption does not bye it ,and they go with the front. They start capture more. Once the find the weapon they end up finding me ,and they start interrogating me. I hid my journal ,and if any one finds this please give this to the army. Because no one knows about this ship,and everyone thinks it sunk. It didn't. I don't know when any one will find this, but when you do tell everyone. My name is Bobby Stick ,and I hope some one will be able to tell my story.
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ski jenkins
8/22/2011 07:30:04 am
Hi i'm ski im the captain of the SS Star. On my voyage to america had different people boared my ship.they was a hippi and his wife and they were looking for the end of the rainbow.Believe it or not we found the end of the rainbow,just like you would think they was a lepracaun was guarding the pot of gold.We told the little man he could board our ship in trade for sum of his gold and he agreed.the leprachaun said his name was shawn and he was in search of boiled p-nuts.Crossing the water was a sign low and behold that said boiled pnuts imagine that.We all used sum of the gold and got boiled pnuts.While we were at sea also found a dog swimming,so we got a net and scooped him up.Low and behold he could talk his name was George.George was in search of a golden bone. We traveled day and nite for 200 days.George began to yell stop the boat floating along in front of the boat was a golden bone.After lots of tryin we got the bone in the boat. Traveling 200 more days we made it to America. When we got to America we began to wok together and cut down trees. Everyone on the ship had to have homes.We got George the dog to do what he does best and dig. After digging for about 4 hours he hit water so we could have a well.The whole crew built there houses side by side.To say the least the voyage came to a happy ending.
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Madelyn Aliffi
8/22/2011 08:05:07 am
They are tourists, who got caught in a thunder-storm. They were thrown to shore. But on a deserted island, with no food. My ship is just peacefully sailing along from island to island looking for gold. When we get to this island there are crazy people looking for food. Next thing I know, there on my ship! I send my biggest, most strong crew member onto the ship to get them off. He comes back running . I ask whats wrong, and he replies, " they are eating all our fruit!" I go to see it myself. He was write, their just chugging all our water and eating all our fruit. I couldnt just leave them there. Starving, and hopeless people, they needed help. I decided we were just going to have some extra weight and do a good deed."I'm a good person!" I thought to my self ,as we sailed away.
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Alyssa Bejnarowicz
8/22/2011 09:22:19 am
As the people aboard the ship I stare strangely at them. As their talking to other people about this very strange object I tend to ignore about what their saying; only thing on my mind is getting to America being able to make money. As I got on the top deck of the boat as the sun setted on the west side as if the sea was eating the sun. I put up my sandy blonde hair and tied a mint green ribbion around my pony tail; soon a tall young man lightly tapped my shoulder. I jumped a first seeing how tall he was,but he wasn`t dangerous looking just questionable. He said his named was Jacob ,and that his family who boarded the ship were looking for a family artifact that was past down from generation and had gotten lost by one of the distant relatives on the boat. I asked what the artifact was; He mentioned it was some kind of minature statue of a great uncle. I thought to myself woundering why would someone want a statue of their uncle. I finally came to my senses and said,"My name is Samantha by the way." Jacob peared at me as if I`ve went bonkers;Strangly he said that his great aunt was named Samantha.Later on that night once everyone was asleep,I couldnt fall asleep,So I went into the storage room; knowing that I wasn`t suppose to be in their I already went in. That statue made me awfully curious. I saw a crate that was written with bold bright red letters said,"CAUTION BREAKABLES." I opened the crate and saw a oddly statue;looked like a person standing holding a some sort of jar. I slowly closed the crate and slumped over the crate and soon passed out by the crate. I woke up the next morning with feet surrounded by me. I got to my feet in flash notcing I had been asleep their. Soon a guy wearing flashy ,but expensive clothing approached me. I started to shiver in fear. He looked apon me and said," You have found a ancient artifact that was stolen;Since you have found this artifact we are going to award you with 50,000 Dollars from one of the famous museums in NewYork." My heart sunk and I burst into tears a joy knowing that becoming a American isn`t so hard after all. For Jacob, I heard from word of mouth he was a criminal that was running away from his country to find the artifact. I soon thought asking him about the statue was a great idea since my curiosity got the best of me. When I got to America I soon used my money to have a small house ,and for my classes in collage. I soon joined the CSI after collage for the anicent artifact that was found by me. Now if that wasn`t a miracle on a boat I dont know what you would call it.
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kayla christmas
8/22/2011 09:51:50 am
so im on this cruise with my family. My dad and my brothers are in the game room , and my mom, my sister, and I are by the pool. It had been about ten minutes or so that the captin made a report saying that strays had managed to climb aboard and to look out.We figured that it was a prank since tomorrow was april fools day. suddenly i hear this wierd scratchy voice comming from above. I open my eyes and this strange lookin man is hubbering over me. i scream and say um your blocking veiw. The man says what do you know about your pres. What, i say back very confussed ? You know your government im talking about the president you disbrain. Um excuse me I say back I happen to know quite a bit about my goverment expecially un like you apperently but not to much personal about my President. Why are you asking.Im on a very important mission i come from sqwabapow . Where? Im not from america okay! Yeah jeez hold the attitude. And maybe I can help you. okay keep talking . Yeah my dads A History teacher. Im sure he knows. But what exactly are you asking for. Its top secret i cant tell you. Well, then how am i supposed to ask my dad what you need. If your dad knows he would be considerd our source in witch case we can tell him . um Okay , well then how bout you tell me , and all google it for you. Google it , what is google it ? Ha google it means you type it in to a website and it will find other sites to help you answer your question.well if it will get my question than sure. My laptops in my room, but i dont know you or your people so im not goin any where with you people. youll have to stay here. well im Cha this is dan , hulio, kim , may,robby, stella , and lens. Why is his name lens? Because he can litterally see everything. Eww!Well i still dont know you guys ill be right back. Okay i have my laptop now whats your question? What is that? Its my laptop! Oh right yes well our question is what size shoe does Americas president wear ?What? Are you serious is this a joke? Dont make me repeat it i dont want every one to know. Um okay let me type this in to Ask.com and see what other people say. okay Lisa Lisa says that Barrack obama ( our president ) is a tall man he is 6'1" so he must have a large shoe size maybe about a mens size ll. There does that answer your question, cha ? yes , guys we got the answer abandon ship abandon ship. wait where are you going? before I could answer my question they were all over ship and out of site. what a strange group of people i thought to myself but its not like anyone will believe what just happend. Well its worth a shot. Mom Mom Mom, there you are guess what just happend , a wierd group of people from a Place called sqwuabapow somewhere not in America came to me and had me find out the presidents shoe size . Sure honey whatever you say go find your brothers were going to eat. But mom ? But nothing now go. Huh i knew you wouldnt believe me.
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Anslee Sewell ((=
8/22/2011 10:07:54 am
I was on cruise and we had just gotten back from the beach in mexico when I see two strange men climb a rope onto the ship. Being the nosy person I am, I went over there and started talking to one of the guys. He said that his thing was confidential and secret. Well, I threatened to get him icked off the boat for being a stow away so he told me. He was looking for a Bananamal. He said it was Half banana Half Bananamal. I thought he was like mental. So, I told him to describe this "thing",Which was obviously imaginary. He said it had the legs of a man, body of a banana, and face of a beard. He says that if we happen to find this "Bananamal" to scream like a banchee. Then I was like ok i will,I said it very sarcastic but he couldnt tell since he was australian. So, my day went on as usual. When I was going back to my room I saw I hobo with a large beard in a banana suit run down the hallway. I started laughing because that was hilarious. Then I saw that that was what the australian men wanted. I looked on the boat to find them and Turns out they catured him. They said that his code name was "the bananamal" and he was under arrest for alleged robbery. I was wierded out, but I had a story to tell so it was cool. I still laugh about it today!
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Monjena Green
8/22/2011 10:12:37 am
As my ship was sailing across the big blue sea looking for island that only show up at night because there are under water at day.Me and my crew come across this m shaped island .As we get close enough to throw out the anchor we set sail to go look at this m shaped island .Before we know we came across an old treasure chest with the Margaret craved on the lid .So the first thing that comes to mind is that my name is Margaret maybe this could be my island that i never new about .Or my be my great grandmother had this island .Who knows so we take the treasure chest up a board with us .But when we get back on the ship we see that some things are messing and then we see muddy foot steps going right down to lower deck were we keep all on the gold .So me and the crew go take a look and we see two men and three woman . But the weren't messing with the gold they were looking for food and the way they were looking they need a lot of it .So as we got to Know them and talk to them one of the ladies asked what were we doing on that island back they and before we got to say any thing see said well that there treasure you found that's mine . And the hole crew looked and said yours and the old lady said yes that mt treasure . So the first thing that comes out of my mouth is your Margaret yes i am and i have a daughter name Mar's yea I know that's a funny name but she loved it know i don't thank it's funny because my grandmother name was Mar's but she died 3 years ago.Well an that's something my daughter died 3 years ago to that's what i know of i haven't seen none of my family in 7 years I'v bein out sea .Well one of my crew members said well maybe you to are family because you all have a lot in common .Well that doesn't mean we are family .But in the back of my head I was hoping we were because my grandmother told me alot bout her mother.And before I could say any thing she said you are my great granddaughter. I was in such a shock I didn't know what to say word's just started to come out of my mouth .All I could have say is that I am so happy to finally meet you .
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Abigail Engel
8/22/2011 10:56:34 am
As the people boarded the ship, We were wondering who they were. They seemed nice & friendly, but we didn't wanna think that & then they turn their back on us. They were tourists, trying to bet back to America. None of them could get into the country of Europe, they had not had the right paperwork,& weren't allowd to enter. So they had stayed in a little motel on the dock for the past few days , waiting for the next boat to come along. They were more than ready to head back. Once they got all settled on the boat, I had noticed a few teenage boys sitting in a corner chatting amongst themselves. They looked suspicious. I decided to walk over there & introduce myself. As I said hello, the guys fell silent. I knew they were trying to hide something. Just as I turned to walk away, one of the guys grabbed me & the othe guys started yelling, telling the passengers on the boat to give him all their money. I was scared. I didn't know what was gonna happen. All I could think was this was not gonna be good. As the passengers got all their money out. We came along the dock leading into Florida. The guys knew they we're about to get in trouble. The one that was holding me quickl let go & I dropped down to my knees. The guys quickly evacuated the boat. Never saw them again, until a week later.. Fox News had a report on 5 teenage guys caught sneaking onto boats & trying to steal people's money. I knew it was them & suddenly felt relieved that they had been caught.
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Janika Gray
8/23/2011 02:25:18 am
I was scared one day.When all of a sudden these people came on our ship.And they looked like they were up to something.All of a sudden people stuff went missing.And i was scared because it could of got worser than that. then day two came and a lady went missing. Thats when i really got scared.And everybody was goin crazy.Than the food went missing. And the captin didnt know a thing about this. and one of those man came to me and ask me for my money and i said no you can not get my money.and thats how it all started.everything was gone.
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Rashad Griffin
8/23/2011 05:21:14 am
They ask me for money ,but i told them no.Then they mysteriously walked to the other side of the boat.I followed them with my noisy self,but then again it was my boat.When they finally stop they went in the bathroom.I couldn't believe what I saw.Almost 100,000 dollars in a bag. Shoot ,and they ask me for money.I should be the one asking them for some money.After I saw it then I looked closer and there was a dead man beside them ,and the blood was on the money.I looked to myself ,and was scared out of my mind ,but then hit me.Like a rock in a tornado.There up to something.The next day a man walked by. He had a long beard with a lens on one of his eyes and a eyepatch on another.I was lughing at him at first ,but then I saw those same guys from last night ,so I hid behind the trashcan. Then they began to walk my way and was petrified.Sweat going down my face.Snot go in and out of my nose.My feet looked liked they were tap dancing.It was all good though ,because they didn't know I was there.Then they stopped at this table ,and I saw a suitcase.It looked liked it had a map in it.A map of a bank or something.Then I thought were in the middle of the ocean how could they rob a bank ,unless there trying to make a withdrawal.So i snuck up there and instantly grabbed the map and threw it in the ocean.Game Over.
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Minna Wamhoff
8/23/2011 06:57:17 am
The people on the boat were there to warn us a terrible storm was coming. They wanted us to hurry and follow them through the safe route. There was also pirates. The pirates were going to take advantage of the storm by raiding us quickly before getting into the storm. The people helping us had seen the pirates and escaped without being seen. So, we trusted them. They took us around the pirate ships that were partially hidden by fog. We almost got to the shore, but we had to turn around again! There were more pirates! We turned and went south. The storm was nearing though, so we turned north again. The pirates saw us! They turned their ships toward ours. We saw them bring out cannons. The ships sped away. We didn't get hit! Luckily, we finally avoided both the storm and pirates successfully! We made it to the shore in one piece. Everyone was happy to see that we were unharmed. We smiled as we got off the ship. I went back to my family. Afterwards, I went home with them.
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Ken Oliver
8/23/2011 08:58:00 am
It's been 66 days out on the sea as far as i'm counting. Today 5 people started coming on board from a vessel, no one knew what the vessel was. All they did was sit around and drink beer. No one talked to them and they didn't talk to us. Then the captain came up to them. "Know, I just received word that you people have drunk all the ships beer and did not pay."
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Quevon Spriggs
8/23/2011 10:40:56 am
I am on the boat riding from Africa to America. I was enjoying the cool breeze air. The boat stopped. Men and women dressed in neon green fabric with ghost tattoos all over their bodies. I looked around and I got very nerves. They ordered for the ship to turn around to go to a place called Emblem Island.When the ship arrived they cuffed everyone and kept them as prisoners. One of the mens' name was Oloife. When they were put underground they were chained to a long dusty hallway and were torched until they did. Me on the other hand was named one of the chosen ones. They took me and a few other people to a large tower. When we arrive in the tower we were taken out of our chains to be marked when we all charged. This turned out to be a huge war. 10 years later.... The war finally ended many warriors died. The strange people in the neon green suits actually wanted people with tattoos to steal them away and to kill them. I finally arrived in America, finished high school, and graduated from collage.
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Anthony Guggino
8/23/2011 10:46:01 am
hey what u doing on my ship.I am looking for someone on this ship.Who are you looking for.His name is Dr.George.Why do u need him?My son is sick he has the small pox.From you guys that came from America.Sorry he is in America right now.Can we came with you guys to see the doctor.Yes said the man.The man went to get his kid.When they arrive in America they went to Dr.George.Dr. George said that he needs to stay out of the sun for a while.The man said ok and they went to their village.When they got back their village was burn down by the Europeans.They got so mad they fought the Europeans.Now the people has to move to America.The indians was happy to move away from the Europeans.Now they are in America happy.
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KoreyGuggino
8/23/2011 11:44:45 am
These people ask me were is the storage.I said why? Then they say because I am looking for something I left in my bag and
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Bob Greenbaum
8/23/2011 12:05:46 pm
When the strange and mysterious people boarded the ship,I did not know what to think. First I thought that they were crimanals or world wide wanted people. I started walking past them and they were talking about the ship and how to control it. Few hours past and the ship made its way to America. I felt scared inside when the strange people talked about how to control the cruise ship. Dinner was served at 9:00 P.M. and people crouded the dining room,some people had to eat outside in the 60deg weather that we are going thought that night. At 9:30 P.M. I heard a explotion from the lower deck,everybody screamed and panicked. I saw smoke flowing out of the air vents and clouded the hall way. A few hours later the officers on the ship caught the people that caused the explotion and the smoke in the hallways. It was the same people that was talking about how to control the ship that day at port. A few days past and we made it to America and the people had to go to an American prison. I will haft to look out for more strange people.
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Ashlee Royal
8/23/2011 09:51:07 pm
They wanted me to help them, because they were getting chased by two big men. So I helped them hide below the deck of the boat. That's when the two men jumped om my ship, and asked me did I see a man and his wife, and I told them no I did not see them. then they began to serch the boat, but they did not find them. So I asked them what do they want from them and they said that they wanted their jewlery. I just took off all of my jewlery and gave it to them so that they could leave those poor innocent people alone.
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tyler morris (8-24-11)
8/24/2011 08:45:04 am
They didnt know where anything was on the boat so i helped them around.So were walking around the boat,and wile we were on the deck we walked pass the kitchin.so were in the kitchen and as soon as we walk out we come by this big old case wit some stuff in it.so were looking in the case and the people said was your name and i said Tyler and i asked them there names they were wesley,and matthew.So me i was taken wesley and mathew tho there room.Next i jogged out to the deck because there was a big whale out there.So im out there and wesley and mathew walked up and said u want to continue the tour and i aid sure.Wile we were walkin around the ship is was getting dark so we went back to our rooms and went to sleep.The next day we all went to the pool and played in the pool.Then after we got out the pool we went to go get a bite to eat.Wile were there at the talble eating my friend Nelson walks up and starts to eat with us.After we got done eating we went to go to the game room and play some video games.Were there playin video games and this hot girl wlked in started to play games by herself.i started to walk over there and i said hey im Tyler and she says hey im Madyson.Me and madyson hung out for the rest of the day.So I walked madyson back tho her room and said goodnight she said goodnight.The next morning me,wesley,and matthew went to go get breckfast.After breckfest we went to go to the gym to lift some wheights.Were in there lifting weights and nelson walkes in and said madysons outside waiting on you.So me and madyson ate lunch together.Me,wesley,matthew and nelson wlked off the ship.We all said bye so madyson and i just walked away with my new friends and had a good life.
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john brazell
8/24/2011 09:26:29 am
The people who board my boat are looking for stowaways who have been robbing banks all over the world and are on the way to Ameria to keep from getting arrested.They are very good at hiding and always hide right im front of you and you wont even know it.They seem to love it when when people fall it makes them laugh.All of the police in the U.S. and crew on my ship are looking for them but some of the cops seem very sneaky and dont seem to real. Although they all are hidden very well it seems as though one has revealed themselves.He seems to easy to crack to be true he said that my crew and I are the stow aways.The police believe them and we are arrested for a very very long time.After fourteen years they find out that we are not the robbers.They paid me and the rew fourteenmillion dollars and said they were very sorry.After three more years the robbers were caught and deported to the end of the world.We need to get them passports first and that takes about three months.Then we needed to find their stashes of money and give it back to the banks.Then they were sent to the end of the world.
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Jeneva Faulk
8/24/2011 09:37:07 am
One day it was just me and my family going on a boat ride for 5 days. Then we had too make a stop for we dont have to be on the boat for 5 days. It was only one day that we didnt stay on the boat and we was at River st in savannah walking around. we was getin ready too go too Hawaii for a family get away. soo we went bac too the boat ready too go too hawaii and some people got on the boat asking us can we take the around savannah soo they can see what it look like and they told us they was aross the river. wich was SC. we didnt mind them at all they look like they are very cool clam people plus they had an older lady. and then we pulled off and like 20 mins later they told was too stop the boat right in the middle of savannah where no one saw was .
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Jeneva Faulk
8/24/2011 09:43:31 am
we didnt know what was going on and they ask us what we had. we didnt saw any thing . it mad them very mad. so they was thowin everything out the boat . and happly thee cops boat saw us and they was wondering why we stop and people thoweing out stuff out the boat and the stop and we ask for help and they said they was tryin too look for then and they fanlly got them
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Hannah Traynor
8/24/2011 10:53:51 am
They look me in the eye. I get scared out of my mind and I run. They thought I knew something, but I didn't. They ran after me and tried to grab me, and they slip. I have more time to escape. They still have me in sight. I'm running as fast I can, but me being all clumsy and all, I fall. It takes me a second to regain my balance, and trying to get the boat to stop spinning. By the time I get back to normal, they're right on my tail. This is the kind of situation and people see you running from someone and they do nothing. I was in this alone. I run and I run and I run, but I can't shake them. Eventually I get tired and slow down without knowing it, and they catch me and throw me in a closet to interrogate me. "WHAT DO YOU KNOW?! DO YOU HAVE IT?!" The tall man with a mustache says. "WHAT?! I HAVE NO CLUE WHAT YOUR TALKING ABOUT!" I scream. The short man with a beard and a trench coat doesn't believe me. He comes closer and looks me in the eye in silence, and slaps me. I scream as loud as I can. And all you hear from the hallway is running foot steps. They people running hear me scream. They door swings open and the police are there. they grab the two men and arrest them. It turns out that what they were looking for was a stolen piece of art that they had stolen, but someone else had stolen from them. I went through all of that running for nothing basically. If i just kept walking this wouldn't have happened.
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Kiyanna Pollard
8/24/2011 02:15:27 pm
The year was 1491. The sunset decorated the horizon, enlightning the sky with orange and reflecting the water of the ocean with a clear glimmer. The sailors sighed. Soon, this evening beuty would be replaced by the evilist of all hours; night. A time where pirates and schemers sailed through the black waters in search of treasures of all sorts. Their boats were small and silent, making them almost impossible to spot until it was too late, they were already latched onto the boat, or were standing on its deck. This was a terror I knew all too well, for me and my crew fell victim to them on that very night.
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logan liverman
8/25/2011 08:20:26 am
i call the captain over and tell him to lock the room with our treasure in it. i walk towards the strange people and start a conversation.they seem nice so i invite them to stay. while all the pirates were eating our usual dinner,chili, i notice them making mysterious conversation. i show them to there room and they seem awfully rude. i call the captain and he tells me to get all the swords and pirates aboard ready to battle. they were to stay in there rooms and wait for the siren to go off. i go to my room which is right next door to the neighbors and carefully drill a hole in the wall. i peek in the room and see many of weapons! i grab the captain and we turn on the sirens. we barge in the room and arrest the criminals. soon later they explained how they justed wanted to join our crew and wanted to impress us with their weapons. soon they join our crew, with a full day of traing. the next morning we wake up the new crew was gone and our treasure was missing.
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Zaria Nixon
8/25/2011 09:08:43 am
There they are standing in the back of the boat. Watching me and talking among themselves. I stand in the background, wondering what they are talking about and what they are looking for. I keep my distance, hoping they won't approach me. I try to get cell phone reception to call my family, but, sadly, no signal. As I start to panic, I move to the lower deck of my yacht, trying to stay as far away from the mysterious strangers. I go to my fifth room on the left side of the hallway of the third floor to check on my cat, Azalea, and soon figure out that she is no longer in her cage. While moving my way to the cage, I see a clump of Azalea's fur on the clamp of the cage door, and her bell collar on the floor next to the bathroom. Terrified at the mysterious clues, I reach to the back of the door for my bat and notice that it is gone. Starting to panic, I throw all of my clothes out of the closet and grab the crowbar out of the closet. I inch toward the door and kick it open to the sight of an empty bathroom. Nothing but a note on the mirror. It reads:
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Brendan Haviland
8/25/2011 09:16:44 am
It was a early Saturday morning on the S.S. Rabbit on the way to the United States, when a group of people approach the main deck. They speak this strange language that I don't recognize. They all stand , not sit, right in front of the seats blocking it from anyone from sitting. One of these people approach me and they asked quietly "Have you seen it?" he said in a thick accent. I responded "What is it?". He exclaimed "It is the Gold Bar! It could bring riches to one of us poor immigrants.". I wished him well and headed back to my small cramped cabin with the thought of that gold bar.
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Paige Simmons
8/25/2011 09:32:49 am
I was on deck when I heard a loud thump. I turned around and I saw a bunch of mysterious people with eyepatches and parrots looking at me. The one with hook for a hand looked me straight in the eye and asked me,"Where is the gold?" I stood there thinking for a minute and I finally came up with, "I don't know where the gold is." He squinted at me looking me dead in the eye like I was lying, but I wasn't. He wandered around the deck for a minute or so and he stepped toward my fellow traveler that was heading with me to the Americas. He asked him the same question he asked me. "Sir, we, we don't have any gold on this ship," He trembled.All he did was stand there for one minute until he started to scream. "GIVE ME THE LOST GOLD!" We finally had to take charge so we put handcuffs on him and we led him to the sleeping chamber.
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Chance Stafford
8/25/2011 09:39:04 am
The people that boarded the have reviled thereselves as pirates. They said that there looking for a treasure map that reviled another treasure map. They didn't tell us what the treasure was. After an hour of them bein on the we heard them talking about something black and shiny. We assumed it was diamonds trapped somewhere. We never bothered to ask so they wouldn't be suspicious and keep us as hostages. They then told us what they were looking for, it was oil. They wanted to know if we knew anywhere they could find it none of us knew. So then they decided to hold us hostage until we told them. What they didn't realize is that we weren't lying. We couldn't convince them that we weren't lying. We did the best to convince them but we couldn't. We eventually gave up and told them a random place of were the map was, which was a lie of course. As we moved on they started telling tales of the riches of the oil like it was no other oil. This oil was extremely rare it could be formed into gas that burned for ages and has zero emissions. That's when we decided to wait until they found it and take it over. We thought it was really risky and it was so did it. We took the oil and sold it to the government for sixty thousand million dollars per a gallon.
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brandon lee
8/25/2011 09:43:55 am
They are starting to search each cabin for a weird bag the called Euro bag.I kept them from trying to riun and trash the rooms.As they kept going they got faster and faster.They made a mess of every cabin.They said they were cops but I knew they were lieing.
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Carley Ennis
8/25/2011 09:57:01 am
I was on a ship out in the Arctic Ocean in the fall of 2010. My friends and I were on our way back from Eastern Russia to America. All of a sudden we saw another ship approaching us. The closer it got to approaching us we got frightened. When it got to us a guy threw a rope and tied up to our ship. There were a tone of guys on this boat dressed all in black. They all started coming onto our boat. We did not know nor understand what was going on. We asked and they would say we don't want to hurt you. We just want what is ours. So our captain asked if he could help and they just said tell me where a little black box is. I asked what's in the box and one guy said a compose or maybe a map! They did let some of us help them look. We looked and looked and it was nowhere to be found. It was getting dark and very cold. It seemed as if they weren't ever gonna leave our ship. Finally in the engine department we found the box! One of the guys dressed in black opened the box and there was a compose and a very shiney gold key. So then all the guys dressed in black got back on their ship. They then went looking for their treasure box.
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Ryley Flathman
8/25/2011 10:12:15 am
September 26 1598
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anna jerome
8/25/2011 10:18:05 am
A family went on a cruise ship to the Bahama's. We went to dinner. The brother was supposed to come to dinner when he got done changing his clothes. He had a spot of ice cream on his shirt. Anyway. He never came! We waited and waited. We looked everywhere, the spa. Hot tubs, the room, the garbage can, the kids places and he was no where to be found. Then I remembered the adults had their own pool. I made my mom go look because I was not allowed in there. She said, "Oh my gosh, gosh, gosh!" "Heeeeeheeee's in there on the bottom of the pool. Look, look he's dead!" Dad! Dad! They drowned him, said the dad? Yes said the doctor. The police looked and looked and finally found the person responsible.They were sentenced them to death by hanging. The family finally got justice.They had his funeral on a Thursday afternoon. The mom, dad, and sister were sad, but eventually got over it.
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Ryley Flathman
8/25/2011 10:29:05 am
September 26th 1698
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Ashlyn Cribbs
8/25/2011 10:47:02 am
We've been at sea for 5 months now, seeing no signs of land or anything but the endless rolling waves. Then out of nowhere Appears. Excitement came over my crew and I as we approached the mysterious island. We gathered what we could for our journey back out to sea to find the missing people of our small town. They had set out for the country of New Zealand a little under a year ago and never returned. As we set out, we heard a strange noise in the back of the ship. So, I went down the stairs to the cabin and came across a group of strange people the were looking through our inventory. Though seemingly harmless, we took precautions. The crew and I approached them, asking what they were looking for. The gave us a funny look and proceeded to search. We asked again in a more demanding tone, but again, they kept searching. Then it hit us that they must not speak English. One of the strangers mummered a word as he began to walk away, still searching. The rest followed. They stopped, and looked at us for a second, then continued on their search. Then one yelled in an exciting tone and all quickly ran to him, including us. Turns out we took a sacred piece of wood that was very meaningful to them. They stopped to look at us, only to smile for a quick second and then left. We proceeded with our journey, and on the way back we found the missing people of our town and made it back safely. That was my journey on the SS Captain Crunch.
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Karli Kozee
8/25/2011 10:53:34 am
We were on a ship heading to America. We were leaving Europe. We were sailing peacefully when three old men were climbing up the ship. Alot of men tried to push them off the side but they were just too strong. The three guys thought we had a hidden treasure on our boat but we really didn't. I was scared to death. They said the only way they would leave is if we gave them all of our money, but nobody wanted to give them any money. So they took over the ship and took everyones phones so we couldn't call for help. Alot of people were trying to come up with plans to get off the ship. Every plan we tried didn't work. The three guys decided to stop at a little island for a minute. After they got off they thought people were following them but they really werent. Another man on the ship started it up and drove us all away. We had no idea where we were. Luckily some woman found where all of our phones were. Only two people on the whole ship has service. We quickly called for help and a police helicopter and ship lead us the right direction. We all got back to America safely. But unfortunately the three guys still haven't been found.
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Kiarra Le'Ann
8/25/2011 10:58:52 am
Im Leaving My Vacation, and Heading Back To America. Im Thinking To Myself When Suddenly, The Ship Makes a Sudden Stop at a Deck and Some Villagers Board. They Look Harmless So I Don't Put Much Thought Into It. Maybe I Should of! Just a Few Hours Later, Things Started Getting Strange. The New Passengers Said They Were Looking For Something, Something Very Important. They Said Their Lives Depended on It. Everyone Is Wondering What It Could Be. Then a Newcomer Yells "We Need PICKLE JUICE! We Wont Leave Untill We Have Atleast Five Gallons!" Theres a Burst of Laughter From Some Of The Passengers, But It Gradually Fades as Someone Threatins To Make All of Us Walk The Plank! This Cant Be Good! So Now, Everyone Is In The Kitchen, Down The Halls, and In Rooms Searching For as Much Pickle Juice as Possible. They Didn't Move The Ship Untill We Were Finish. We All Ended Up Collecting About 27 Gallons of Pickle Juice...Who Knew a Ship Had That Much Pickle Juice?! Once The Newcomers Were Off The Ship, We Rushed Our Way To America. Boy, Wont That Be a Story To Tell My Grandkids!
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Toby Martin
8/25/2011 11:05:13 am
I boarded my ship in Ireland on my way to America and a new life. Then I came across a mighty storm called Hurricane Irene. The storm blew us south to an island called Haiti, where these people boarded our ship. They were searching for a special kind of plant, called the Golden Tree. The tree grows apples that are solid gold, and thus the name. I asked these people where they would find such a tree, and they told me it was in California. The people ask, "Do you want to come with us?" and then I say, "Yes, but I do not think that such a thing exists." "Come with us and you shall see!" they say. We sail from Haiti to Texas. We had these golf carts with an unlimited supply of fuel and drove from Austin, Texas, to California. When we got there, I said, "I don't see it." They said, "Oh you will, man." I said, "OK." We climbed the mountain to the Hollywood sign. When we got up there, there was a dense forest of redwood trees. I still didn't see the Golden Tree. They said, "Wait for it, man." And so, we cut through the forest. There it was, the Golden Tree. I said, "Man, that's big. So I took my gold and exchanged it for money to build a theater. I owe it all to my Haitian friends.
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Trent Bridges
8/25/2011 11:24:39 am
Today on the cruise has been exciting so far. We are on the way to the Bahamas. We stopped some place yesterday and I went swimming. Today on the way to lunch I met some new people They just joined the cruise today when we stopped. They seemed nice so I tried to make friends. So we became friends over time. We started meeting up at lunch every day. Later one day I was on the way to lunch. When I saw my friend talking to his parents. I walked past them and I overheard them talking about something they needed to get off the boat. Later my friend came and sat beside me to eat and asked if I had seen the pearl on the boat. I said no lets go see it after we eat he said sure. Well later when we went he was looking around alot. I asked him what he was doing and he said nothing. He was acting all suspicous so I said lets go some were else. When we went are separate ways he hurried to his room. Later I found him and his family stole the pearl and left. They had someone waiting for them on the side boat. They were wanted for 1 million dollars.
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Kristain Shuman
8/25/2011 11:52:41 am
Hi I'm Kristain Captain of this ship and you tell me you are looking for something strange. What is it that you are looking for exactly? "My Wife and I are looking for the the very rare Pink Leprechaun Dragon. It has really short wings so it doesn't fly. Its back legs are really long and its arms are average. It is 3 different kinds of pink it is light pink, hot pink ,and dark pink and of course it has the look of a leprechaun. We are wondering if we can ride this ship in order to find this dragon?" said the strange man. Ok well since I am the captain of this ship and I say yes you can ride this ship. I know that it will probably mean alot to you that I am doing this. There are rules on this ship the rules are: No stealing from this ship , what happens on this ship stays on this ship and if you do something wrong to anyone including me you will be kidded off of this ship. So they say that they understand and that they agree that they should get thrown off of this ship if any of that happens. They are on the ship for at least three weeks. After those three weeks i hear that they are stealing and threatening my crew. It takes me one week to confront them and it takes this long so I know that it was true. And i told them that I have heard that they are doing that and of course they try and lie. But I know better and i throw them off of the ship. We were already going in the direction of the Pink Leprechaun Dragon. So we just kept going that way to try and find the dragon. Once we are on our way we realize that were we are that we have never been to this place before. It took us like three days to actually find the dragon. And then we find the Pink Leprechaun Dragon. The Dragon is just the way they said it was but they didn't say that it granted wishes. And so we took our wishes and that is the end of this story.
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Chris Kunkel
8/25/2011 12:19:48 pm
I aboard the ship heading to America. It'll be a long trip but in the end it will be worth it. I step into the dining hall.Grabed a meal and left for a walk.I didnt suspect to see some people to be following me.
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Alexis Morgan
8/25/2011 01:05:35 pm
I look back, & i see people jumping on my ship, so of course im wondering who they are & what they want. So i screamed " Who are yall!? "
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Amaure Bing
8/26/2011 08:19:13 am
I was on my ship sailing to America.When these people pop out of no were and asked me if I seen some treasure. I said no, but I would help u find your treasure if u give me half.The people said ok, so we look and look until some one spotted the treasure, that was under my bed. The strange people said thank you and gave me some of the treasure and they left and I live happy and rich for the rest of the day.
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Brandon Hudson
8/26/2011 08:32:40 am
Ok so im on this boat when all the sudden these people come up to me.So im like hey hows it going.They just stare back and it starts creeping me out.So then I ask,"Can i help you with anything."They just stare at me and then the whisper somthing to eachother.So at this point im like hello anyone there.They still dont answer me.At this point im thinking ok they one dont speak English or Two their terriost. So i go tell the captain so he tells one of the deck boys to go down there and see wats up.When we get back there they are no where to be found. So we ask around and people are like no havent seen anyone get on like that.Then i find out that this ship has had ghost sightings.So now when i got of the ship.I went to my hotell and sleeped with the lights on.
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Shannon Bragg
8/27/2011 03:19:58 am
They boarded the ship with anger in their eyes and great determination on the faces. The passengers stare in disbelieve noticing their strange features.
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Emily Haar
8/29/2011 07:48:10 am
I'm on a ship just relaxing and having a very good time, when all of a sudden this cat comes prancing up on me. I was a little confused at why there was a cat on a ship anyway. I started to pet the cat when this man and woman came running up to me. At first i didn't know what to expect. The man was wearing a sparkly blue shirt, this was kind of weird. The woman was just a average looking woman. The man finally spoke up. He said 'Oh Chloe, thank god you found her!' I told them if it's their cat they might wanna take it before it drowned then the strange people ran off. The next day on board I seen them again, this time they were walking up and down the bathrooms. I thought this was a little strange. Everytime someone would walk out the bathroom they would say 'Hi come again.' To be honest I thought they were just crazy. After I got to America, I heard they were headed to New York. The city that never sleeps is gonna have a wake up call. I was headed to California. Two years after I was already living in America, I seen the strange people on TV. They had won 967 million dollars from a scratch off ticket. I also got a call that night. It was the strange people. They were informing me that they were giving me 4 million dollars for saving their cat. They are now my favorite people in the world.
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Jason Roddenberry
9/1/2011 10:00:18 am
im on this cruise with my family. I see a group of people who as for donations. I kindly give them 20 bucks. They say thank you. I spy on them with my nosy self. They ask everybody fOr donations. When they come up to this group they start acting strange.
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marquis person
9/13/2011 02:50:30 pm
I was on a boat. There was a bunch of people one the boat. We was going to America. Most of the people was coming from vacation. I was coming from vacation. Out in the ocean I saw a old looking ship. It saw us.It came over to us. The people didn't look mean. They looked poor. They had tore up clothes, no shoes, and all their clothes was too small. They didn't speak english. I think because when we asked them thing they didn't say anything. They just held out their hand hoping for money. Nobody gave them money. People just stared. The people started to leave but before they did a little boy in a suit pulled out a 100 dollar bill. He handed it to one of them they smiled and walked away.
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garrett lewis
10/4/2011 06:35:03 am
It was i a long sunny day on the way to america . i was kind of sea sick .with the boat moving back and forthe with all the waves . the next thing i know this stange people start to board my ship. im like who do the people think they are boarding my ship. this people much be crazy . i went up to these people to go and kick them off the ship . but as i walked up to them i saw how they looked . they were poorly dress, and scares and wounds every where , and i stared to feel bad for them soo i ended up asking them if they need any thing . they said no. and i as i turned to walk away they asked were this boat was going . i repled to the usa. they seemed releaved . i aske dwhere are you from. they said to this bad country that has no freedom, i told them that when we get to the united states that they would be as free as a bird . soo we got to the unitedstates and now they lived happily ever after.the country they came from beat them and starved them . these people were slaves . they were lucky to surrvive. and to exscape to come with us. there only regrets are leaveing there other family.but later on, they meet up in the usa and live happily ever after.
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Wesley Waldron
10/5/2011 03:23:03 am
Who are they papa?Why are they boarding our ship?Ive never seen them before?"There none son,just people coming to help us out."Why do we need help,our ship is perfectly fine,an everyone is ok."They are just people,dont worry about them,they will be here for a while."I dont liek the way they look at me,or eat,this is our ship and they dont need to be here!"Son dont worry about them."Yes ser.As the days went on they just acted regular and didnt say anything to me.I never did understand why they came on our ship,or why they havent left yet,but it's not my busseness to know i guess.One day,something strage happend,something i also didnt understand,One of the men talked to me,today is the first day one of them has talked to me.I didnt understand it.They've been on our ship now for a year or so an today they talked tome.I told father an he siad"if one of them say anything just say yes ser,or no ser"i was gonna ask why but i just said yes ser.None really understood why they came,but,i never tryed to find out.-
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Jenny
10/5/2011 04:02:06 am
If a ship was to come to America i would get on it . I would see where it would go I i would hope that it would go around the world. And i could see every thing and every where that i learned about in history class. I think that it would be fun. To explore the world and see every thing. that i have never seen before. It would be soo excited. I would ask one of my best friends to go with me. and we could go shoppen in the different countrys . And we could stay the night on the boat. And then the next morning we could go to the country. and do the same thing there . and then get back on the boat. We could meet different people . from different nations. and see how they cook different foods and every thing and . then we could get back on the boat and go home . the end
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