Imagine that you could give advice to someone—it could be someone you know personally, a historical figure, or a famous person living today. Write three paragraphs that identifies the person and the advice you would give. Choose a familiar subject so that you can provide details and elaboration that explain why this person needs your advice.
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Imagine that you could give advice to someone—it could be someone you know personally, a historical figure, or a famous person living today. Write three paragraphs that identifies the person and the advice you would give. Choose a familiar subject so that you can provide details and elaboration that explain why this person needs your advice.
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Brennan King
4/2/2015 12:34:17 am
Anybody now a days can take advice. Only depending on the person it is from. A person I would give my advice to is my little sister. I give advice to her because she is still little and I can give tips to them while they are growing up. I can teach them things not to do and what to do because I have probably had a personal experience with it. One thing I would give advice to them about it school. Education is very important now a days. Because for a good job you mainly have to have an education. An education is important because if you have a really good job you get paid really good money. You grades in middle and high school do reflect off what you will do later on in life. Because if you don't pay attention in class and you get bad grades than you might not know anything later in life. Also anything you do can reflect off of you. Also I can tell my sister to enjoy life. And don't let little things bother you. And don't let other people get in your way. Live the life you want to live!
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Reese Nighbert
4/14/2015 03:42:34 am
If I could give anyone advice, I would go back to 9 months before April 20, 1889 and talk to Klara Hitler For those of you you don't know, Klara Hitler is Adolf Hitler's mother. My piece of advice for her would be to never have a kid because he would end up being the dictator of Germany and the leader of the Nazi political party.
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Jenna Roberson 2nd period
4/2/2015 12:34:36 am
A person that I can give advice to would be my two nieces and my nephew. They are still little kids and I can give them advice as they grow up, for what to do and what not to do. As they grow up and are in school I would give them advice on always focusing on their school work. Make sure their school work comes first before playing. I don't want them to do bad in school so I would give them advice and always tell them not ever even think about dropping out. As they get older I want them to enjoy life and I will give them advice of what I have done in my life that the should or should not do. I would also tell them to live a good life and don't let the little things in life bother them. I would tell them that it doesn't matter what other people think of them that they are great and they have a wonderful family that loves them for who they are.
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jaylin3rd
4/2/2015 12:36:12 am
Today everyday I think that somebody need's advice.It don't matter if your a grown up or an child.I think a good person for me to give advice to is my cousin.Because, we are very close and she's getting older and I don't wont her to be like me and make the wrong mistakes like I did.I want her to be better than me and make better choices than I did when I was her age.She a very sweet girl and kind.She's just now getting into the big girl world.She's in the 6th grade and next year I wont be here with her to watch and make sure she's doing the right thing's but I wont be far if she ever need's me ill be right across the street.But,were family so,we will see each other a lot. My cousin means the world to me and I want the best for her.I want her to get her education and go to college and have something in life.Not be on the streets and doing the wrong things.
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Gabbi Hanlon 2nd
4/2/2015 12:38:20 am
Have you ever given someone advice? Did they thank you for it? Well I have a complicated sister that doesn't like to listen to me very well. Anytime I ask her to do something she flat out tells me no. She is a tough nut to crack.
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Taylor Vezevicius 1st pd
4/2/2015 12:40:08 am
When my cousin will get older I will be giving her advise.
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alex g 3rd not finished
4/3/2015 03:33:58 am
Everyone needs advice to take. Advice wis what comes the way of trouble peple. Most people need advice when they are sad. My best bowling friend needed advice when her boy fiend broke up with her on vaction.
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alex
4/3/2015 11:35:12 pm
Most boys are just pigs they don't know how to behave. Boys are the ones who need to go to obedient school instead of dogs. Unlike grils boys are not muture they are the ones who drop out of school for no reason most of the time.
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alex
4/3/2015 11:38:24 pm
Girls are the muture and don't need boys to get there education. That is real advice.
Lane C 4th period
4/8/2015 01:35:52 pm
If I could give advice to anyone, it'd be someone my age or a bit younger. This day in age, many things are often handed to people of my generation. This isn't terrible persay, but the problem comes when people expect to be handed everything. No one should expect to be handed and given everything. Some work should be involved.
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Kylie N 2
4/9/2015 12:07:45 am
If I were to give advice to anyone I would give advice to my little sister. She is very stubborn. She does not listen to anyone but my parents. She doesn't listen to me.
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Alex g 3rd
4/9/2015 05:33:47 am
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Mollee b 3rd period
4/12/2015 10:56:47 pm
One person I give advice to is my little brother. I give him advice because he's still young and still in the process of growing up. I give him advice on everything.
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Evy Brown 1st
4/13/2015 12:14:13 am
Giving advice to someone can be very helpful. If I had to give advice to someone, it would be my younger sister. I would want to give her advice because I feel that sometimes she doesn't understand the correct way to reply to someone. My advice to her would be, sometimes people will get on your nerves and sometimes you'll be very aggravated for no reason, but understand that not everything will not go your way.
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Madison F 4th
4/13/2015 02:24:06 am
If I was to give advice to a close friend who was upset, I would tell them my favorite quote. My favorite quote is "Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning how to dance in the rain." When you are upset you should't wait until something happy comes to you, you should make something happy. In a storm you shouldn't just wait for the nasty storm to pass, you need to make something happy out of the rain. You should dance in the puddles.
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Makenzie D 4th
4/13/2015 03:23:13 am
If I had to give advice to anyone, it would be my younger cousin. I would tell them to never give up and follow their dreams. I would also tell them to ignore hateful comments because they do not matter. Sometimes you just need to be the bigger person and ignore hate from others, because most of the time, it is not true. Follow what you know and you will do great things.
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Harmon R 4th
4/13/2015 03:28:01 am
I would go back to meet Martin Luther King Jr, because he was a great historical figure. He was a great man who always helped people no matter what race. He seemed in distress at one point in his life so I went back to help. I first saw him in his home before he became a pastor. He really didn't seem like the MLK we all know.
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Katie A 4th
4/13/2015 03:55:22 am
If I could give anyone advice, it would be my little sister. She is five years old in pre-k at the high school. She views school as a fun place, which it can be. She is not prepared for the harsh reality of hurt feelings, and rude jokes she will be exposed to.
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Gracie W 2nd
4/13/2015 11:14:31 pm
A person I would give advice to would be my little brother he is in 1st grade. I he looks as school as a place to have fun and to play around. Yes school can be that way but he needs to start to buckle down and work. some of the things he is doing i was doing in 2nd grade. He has way more homework then I ever had to think about doing at anytime off the year. School is where he needs to sit down and learn . Yes school helps you be social that's a good thing and he needs to be social. To the social part can really get you in some trouble. The people that's your friends now really just might not be later down the road. Always keep your head held high and stay focused. Don't let people get in your way no mater what. Always be yourself no matter who you are around. Treat Your teachers with respect and they will show you respect back. Also treat you friends the same way you want to be treated.
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Ian Brinson 2nd :P
4/14/2015 12:46:03 am
If I could give advice to anyone I would advise Thomas Jefferson how he made the lightbulb so he wouldn't fail so many times and it would definitely save a whole lot of time.
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jonathan b 2nd period
4/14/2015 12:49:23 am
If I could give advice to anyone I think that it would be Ian Brinson. I would pick him because he never seems to be able to type a blog the way you are supposed to do. I would tell him straight to his face that he needs to stop just writing three sentences and that he needs to write the full three paragraphs.
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tyrique
4/14/2015 02:32:55 am
If I could give advice to anyone I would give advice to my nephew. Because his dad died and I have to be there for him. Like he is very sad and I would just like talk to him about how he feels and what he should do to lose that feeling.
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Michael L.3rd
4/14/2015 02:35:11 am
If there was one person I would give advice to is my little brother because he will go through middle school and he plays baseball like me so I could teach him a few things about baseball
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Autumn 4th
4/14/2015 03:41:39 am
If I was to give advice to anyone it would be someone close to my age. Many pre-teens/teens are faces with difficult struggles that weren't as apparent or even existing back in the day.
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Madison Johnson 2nd pd.
4/14/2015 06:59:11 am
Taking advice from someone can be hard and sometimes it can be easy. I would give advice to both of my sisters. I love my sisters with all of my heart. It can be challenging to tell my three year old sister because she doesn't understand a lot yet. On the other hand, my six year old sister can understand a little more than my other sister.
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Chase Howze 4th
4/14/2015 09:45:25 am
If I could give advice to anyone that ever lived I would give advice to Miley Cyrus. Now she is not as good as she used to be. She used to have a disney show. But then she got in trouble and they wouldn't let her play on disney.
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Breanna J. 4th
4/14/2015 09:45:41 am
Have you ever wished you could go back and give advice to a person that you know? What kind of advice would you give them? I personally wish that I could go back and give advice that may help the people who have made mistakes in the past. The first person I would visit to give advice to would be my younger self. I would go back and tell myself about life and about what I have learned about people and their attitudes and actions that will happen to them someday.
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gwendolyn S. 1st pd
4/14/2015 09:55:12 pm
Any advice I would give to you my dear cousin Beatty Wright is that when you are performing your music you stay focused to it . You've been singing since the early 1800s. I know you love music. Keep playing and singing.
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halie 2nd.
4/15/2015 12:22:08 am
One person I give advice to is my little sister. I give her
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caleb w. 2nd
4/15/2015 12:31:52 am
A person i would give advice to would have to be my litttle sister. she is in 4th grade. And she is only 11 years old. I would tell her all about middle school. And how it works and what you have to do to stay in all good classes. She has already failed kindergarten but it wasn't her fault.
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Micaiah Bolton 2nd Period
4/15/2015 12:32:04 am
Dear John Williams,
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iyonte' 2nd
4/15/2015 12:36:33 am
I would go back in time and give advice to myself so I can prepare myself for the near future and let myself know that there will be times where it would be hard and you will feel like giving up but don't give up because you will get something out of it you might loose some friends along the way but that's only because they was only suppose to be your friend for a little time but then you will get new friends that will be there for you to help you along the way, that will encourage you to do your best and never give up, so there will be times when things get hard but just remember to just keep go so start preparing yourself for hard times
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Rebeca B. 4th
4/15/2015 03:34:43 am
If I could give advice to somebody it would be a good friend of mine. She's going through some tough times. She's going through the same things that I've gone through and I'm currently going through. I would tell her that life goes on and everything will be okay. I know that's what everyone says but it's true.
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Cullen Peel 4th
4/15/2015 03:46:46 am
There are a number of topics i could give advice for. There is an even bigger number of people. But if i were to have to pick one topic and one person… I would have to choose my little sister. She is in 4th grade and ten years old. I would give her advice on how to not procrastinate.
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Amy Conley 2nd
4/15/2015 06:38:34 am
If I could give someone advice I would go back to 2006 and tell Justin Bieber to not make music or trust his dad.
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James Reinhart
4/15/2015 07:00:02 am
I would give advice to my nephew when he gets older and start school. My advice to him would be to pay attention in class and not slack off in class. And not to get bad grade.Because I did and it finally came back and bit me in the butt.
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Aubriana Per.1
4/15/2015 07:20:15 am
If I could give anyone advice it'd probably be my cousins in Ohio. Ever since they were little they had been horrible kids. My uncle didn't really do anything to make an indent in their behavior. They mostly did anything they wanted. Therefore, as adults they became idiots.
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Kaila C.4th
4/15/2015 07:35:43 am
If i had to give advice to anyone it would be my little brother even though he never listens to me.I would tell him to be good in school and get his grades up.If he doesn't listen to me on this one it will cause him major damage.No one in the family was ever held back and we're not planning on having anyone get left back.
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laurel p 2nd
4/15/2015 07:39:38 am
if I had to give advice to anyone it would to kids my age. I would give advice to them about being respectful towards your parents. I say this because everyday I hear kids talking about their parents behind their backs and I feel that they are being disrespectful.
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Anna F. 4th period
4/15/2015 08:48:57 am
If I had the ability to go back and give someone some good advice, it would be Mr. Jeff Rollins. When Brother Jeff died, he cashed of a low blood sugar. If someone would have told him not to go without eating a bit less sugar he wouldn't have gotten into an accident. Brother Jeff was a man that I looked up to.
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Ernest Washington per.1
4/15/2015 11:25:22 am
If I was to give somebody an advice it will be teachers because some teacher are annoying , too nice or play to much
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Bryan Vezevicius pd2
4/15/2015 01:16:03 pm
Whom would I want to give advice to? I would give advice to my great great grandma. I would want to give her advice to keep this building she had that was her own little shopping outlet. It made tons of money and was really successful.
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Brianna Sims 2nd
4/16/2015 03:38:09 am
If I could give advice to some one I would give it to my little brother. He is in the 6th grade. Middle school is really hard for him. In elementary school he didnt swicth calsses besides in like 3rd grade. Know he has 6 classes.
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Evan Oglesby
4/16/2015 06:56:32 am
I would give my little brother Colton advice. Because he is you young and does a lot of stuff wrong. He gets in lots of trouble for these things and i could tell him not to do them. He would still probably do them anyways because he is hard headed.
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Wyatt Howard
4/16/2015 07:15:07 am
Giving people advice can be good or bad. Some people give some advice to people to make them not get better. But most people give good advice, and not bad advice. Advice can really help people excell in life. Some people who don't get advice end up in prison.
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Cat 4th
4/16/2015 07:18:06 am
Giving advice to people is something I think I am pretty good at. Everyone has needed advice before at least one time in their lives. My youngest brother Edward is the brother I give the most advice to. He usually listens to me and he understands what I tell him most of the time. He is six years old and has a lot of life to live and he needs good advice to make the most of it.
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madison b 1st
4/16/2015 07:46:41 am
If i had to give advice to someone I would give it to my best best friend. I would give it to her because she seem to get the concept of reading in between the lines. I would give her advice about Boys and friends. i would just get her advice about life in general.
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eli roberts
4/16/2015 07:52:20 am
if i could give advicew to anyone i would give advice to the air plane people when 9 11 happend. i would tell them that it was ganna happen. if they knew that they would probobly bumped up security and been smarter. so many lives where lost that day.
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Brandon brown 3rd
4/16/2015 08:05:14 am
One day Cliff wanted to play the ps4. So after turning the system on for him and getting to the game, he said " thanks". So I asked him " do you need anymore help on here"? He said " no". So I sat there quietly, not saying a word. 30 minutes went by and he died 100 times. He said " this game is to hard for me". He killed 0 people in that time frame".
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Cayman S. 4th period
4/16/2015 08:36:46 am
If I could give advice to anyone it would be my little brother. He is still very young and I want him to end up being a good person. I would give him advice on what to do and what not to do. I would also give him advice on how to be nice to people because he likes to hit a lot of people.
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Michaela Rahn 4th period
4/16/2015 08:38:29 am
If I could give anyone advice I would probably give my little sister some advice. I would prepare her for reality. She is only 8 years old and she thinks that the world is this happy pretty wonderful place.
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Caitlin E 4th
4/16/2015 08:56:05 am
If I had to give anyone good advice, I'd give advice to my little sister. She's only 10 and still in elementary school. I would give her advice about going into middle school and I'd tell her ways she could make her life in it much easier and less stressful as it is/was for me.
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Josh B 2nd
4/16/2015 09:05:02 am
Most people in this world need advice because they are missing out on one little thing. For example, Michael Oher. He is now a pro football player that had grown up in the bad part of town. Now he is making millions. Just because he is good at a sport. Playing his favorite sport and making money at the same time. My advice from me to him is that to not stop dreaming. Don't think you have no power. You have a little bit of power. Not too much. You can make what is in your budget happen. Yet, an another little piece of advice. Life will knock you down, but it is your choice to get back up.
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Chase Roberts 1st
4/16/2015 10:17:12 am
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Katie C 3rd
4/16/2015 10:49:09 am
Some one I would give advice to is all famous people in general. I would give them advice because they let money take over their lives, also fame. Also I would let them know to not be discouraged when someone doesn't like them or thinks they suck. They shouldn't let people's opinions affect how they do their career.
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Tala S. 4th
4/16/2015 11:23:13 am
Whenever many of us go to bed at night, we are tortured by our previous mistakes and regretting reasons that had caused embarrassing events. Honestly, I would find that self impulsion or this dread of the past is rather unbearable. So, if I ever was granted the occasion, I would prefer to give advice to my past self to relieve them from any night terrors from excessive hatred of the self. Even if I have smoothed out some edges relating to this ordeal, my mind just cannot erase those awful memories. Perhaps, if I were able to do such a thing, I'd save myself from those wretched regrets. Although, I can' say I am not afraid of what consequences might come my way if I did partake in such an action.
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deangelo 3rd period
4/16/2015 11:38:36 am
If i were to give advice i would give it to lebron james. Lebron is one of the best basketball players in the NBA. So he really doesnt need much advice, because it dont get no better then being one of the top players in the NBA. But the advice i would give Lebron james, is to keep up the good and hard work because its goin to pay off. And not that i have anything against you Lebron, but u need to past the ball more.
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Kevin Thomas
4/16/2015 12:12:23 pm
If i could give advice to anyone that I know or living would be anyone. I would tell them to keep their head up and never give up. Because if you never give up you would never stop so you would not fail. If you keep your head up no matter what you can make it through very bad stuff. Just never stop being confidented in yourself. If you can be confidented in yourself you wouldnt care who talks about you.
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Taryn Shurling 1st
4/16/2015 12:16:20 pm
As we all know, everyone dies at one point. Even if it's the people we love, or envy. Maybe even hate. One person in particular is Robin Williams. No one knew what went behind the comedian's happy smile. Not until he ended it himself.
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Tiffany P 4th
4/16/2015 12:19:30 pm
Advice that I would give to my cousin. She recently got out of a relationship. Even though she ended it, I still know she hurts. They've been together for a little over two years now, and they just grew in two different directions. So, my advice to her would be to wait for the storm to pass.
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Alexia G 1st :)
4/16/2015 12:48:32 pm
Hey there,
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Joshua w 2nd
4/16/2015 12:50:49 pm
If I could give any advice to someone it would be to Russell Westbrook.I would tell him to not be so selfish with the basketball. Not that I have anything against himBut to be a true point guard I the game of basketball you need to pass the ball.You can not always think about your shelf.
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Todd 1st
4/16/2015 01:09:28 pm
If i could give advice to anyone in the world, i would give it to those kids who are harassed or bullied at school. I would give advice to these people because every day someone is putting another down on purpose. I just want to tell these kids that what other people say doesn't really matter, because on the inside you know who you are and thats all that matters.
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Brandon Story 4th
4/16/2015 02:12:42 pm
I would go back to the day Abraham Lincoln was assassinated. I would warn him of John Wilkes Booth. There is just so much speculation as to what would have happened. Our country could be so much different.
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Ronnie b. 3rd
4/16/2015 09:36:09 pm
If I could give any person in histroy advices who would I choose and what would I say.i don't know who I would choose I could pick from any one I know.but who should it be?
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eric j 1st
4/16/2015 10:23:08 pm
I would give advice to somebody that do stuff they dont need to do. And if you give advice to those people the might take your advice . people should try to listen to people with advice.
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KuwanD3rd
4/16/2015 10:33:31 pm
If i had to give someone advice it would have to be Stephen Curry because he is already one of the best Basketball player in the NBA . He has accomplished so much already in his career . But the advice i would have to give to him. Would be to keep up the hard work and continue to be the best point guard that he already is. Keep on passing the ball creating opportunitys for your other team mates . And making them better on and off the court . Curry is already broke his own record for the most threes in a single season he broke his record this year. And hopefullly he will MVP for this season. He his on the Warriors who had the best record in the conference for 2014 t 2015 season. If Curry keeps up the hard work he will become the best Basketball player to ever live. Im sure one day he will make it into the Hall of Fame for all his hard work and dedication to the NBA and to his team . They all will one day will make it to the Hall of Fame. But Curry is the face of the NBA and the leader to his team. So this advice will also help me move on and get better at basketball as I get older.
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Hannah McQueen 3rd
4/17/2015 12:01:49 am
If I could give someone advice it would be Aberham Lincoln to not go to the theater because if he lived longer our country could have been more socially advanced.
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Dakota Burgess
5/10/2015 09:24:15 am
If I could give anyone advice in anytime period, I would choose John F. Kennedy. To some, JFK is "the worst president we ever had". JFK did many things wrong when he was in office.
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