You are on a ship coming to America. Suddenly some people board your ship. You don't know what to do! Yet these people don't seem dangerous. They are looking for something very, very strange.What do the people want? What happens? Finish the story. Be creative!
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You are on a ship coming to America. Suddenly some people board your ship. You don't know what to do! Yet these people don't seem dangerous. They are looking for something very, very strange.What do the people want? What happens? Finish the story. Be creative!
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Wesley waldron
8/12/2011 01:41:09 am
Dear cafateria people,
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Logan Beasley
8/12/2011 06:22:13 am
To whom it may concern ,
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Noel Newton
8/12/2011 06:46:16 am
Dear cafiteria staff,
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Shannon Bragg
8/12/2011 10:13:52 am
Dear cafeteria workers,
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Quevon Spriggs
8/12/2011 10:40:01 am
Hello Cafeteria Staff,
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jennie ellis
8/12/2011 10:59:26 am
Dear lunch room people i think that yall should put like steak or somthen else on the mean . Instead of the same things. people want some thing new . Im just asking you to put some then new on the mean . thank you
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Brandon Hudson
8/13/2011 03:07:31 am
Dear cafateria people,
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Jo' Esha Lee
8/14/2011 03:11:14 am
Dear Lunch Workers,
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Brendan Haviland
8/14/2011 03:40:20 am
Dear Cafeteria Staff,
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Logan Beasley
8/15/2011 06:25:53 am
To whom it may concern,
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Minna Wamhoff
8/15/2011 06:49:24 am
To whom it concerns:
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Quevon Spriggs
8/15/2011 07:30:38 am
Hello Cafeteria Staff,
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Amanda Burgess
8/15/2011 08:08:44 am
Dear cafiteria staff,
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Abigail Engel
8/15/2011 08:14:40 am
To Whom it may concern,
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Ken Oliver
8/15/2011 08:18:32 am
Dear, Cafeteria workers
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John Brazell
8/15/2011 08:50:58 am
Dear ECMS cafeteria staff,
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Paige Simmons
8/15/2011 09:27:59 am
Dear ECMS cafeteria staff,
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Emily Haar
8/15/2011 10:06:12 am
To whom this may concern,
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Fayzaun Talmadge
8/15/2011 10:11:14 am
Dear lunch servers,
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Patrick Begley
8/15/2011 10:24:48 am
Dear School,
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Treor Usher
8/15/2011 10:11:01 pm
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Trevor Usher
8/15/2011 10:26:46 pm
Dear Cafateria, I am writing a letter on behaf of the horrible food you serve at lunch. Nobody likes the food you serve. ( By the way, Mr. Smith told us to write this so if it gets around to you, dont blame me.) Anaway, I have to bring a lunch everday so i dont eat tocos with no meat or orange fries. I mean, fries arent suppost to be orange. Their suppost to be golden with a yummy salty taste. Tocos, their suppost to have meat on them. All you serve is hard tocco shlls. I would like to see you serve some good seafood. Like mouthwatering aroma seafood. like one day, you should serve lobster, with the alternate. For a side you should serve crisp shrimp with a secret sauce. You should also squirt a little lemon over all of is. We should have a choice of drink. Those drinks should be exotic.And for those people who dont like seafood, they can bring their lunch. Would you rather make the whole school sad or a few people sad. So, you should make up your mind. About the food and drinks. so now you know what I think about the food. You also know how everone else fells. So just ask yourself WWJD. (What Would Jesus Do)
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Rashad Griffin
8/16/2011 05:26:15 am
I wish they would serve fried chicken at our school. I'm getting tired of this refried beans.It looks like puke.Fried chicken is not that healthy,but it will do good things for you.Like it will make you grow some.It wont kill you.Sometimes it's good to eat fried chicken every once in a while. If you do it i would be greatful.Its part of your good food pyramid. It's not the worse thing in the world.You already serve chicken fingers what's the difference.All i'm saying is please stop feeding us these nasty lunches when you could be feeding these great luches instead. I would love to fried chicken once in a while.I don't even care if we only have it once.Could you please consider it. Thank you if you do it.
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michaelmcdonald
8/16/2011 06:33:38 am
I wish they would have cheese sticks more often.I wish u would stop giving us nasty food.A bunch of people would buy the lunchs if u gave it to us.Its really good.Some of the food u give us is just nasty.I dont even know what it is.Yall also need to give us more.At least give us more pizza.Pizza is good also.I really like pizza.You can put some fries with that too.Please consider what I have said.More kids would eat.You can give us some fried chicken too.Everyone like chicken.Will you please give those things.It would make us happier at school.We might be able to get better grades.maybe even a's.So please make us happy.
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Jeneva Faulk
8/16/2011 06:53:14 am
Dear Lunch works
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Noah Parker
8/16/2011 07:05:03 am
Dear, Cafeteria Staff
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Kiyanna Pollard
8/16/2011 08:34:46 am
Dear fellow luchstaff,
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Brandon Lee
8/16/2011 09:41:48 am
Dear lunch staff,
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Kristain Shuman
8/16/2011 09:48:35 am
Dear Cafeteria Staff,
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Austin Marchant
8/16/2011 10:03:11 am
Dear Lunch People,
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Hannah Traynor
8/16/2011 10:10:45 am
Dear Mrs. Recardo,
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Trent Zeigler
8/16/2011 10:38:06 am
Dear Lunch Ladies,
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Jason Roddenberry
8/16/2011 10:18:27 pm
I have a favorite food that yall never serve on yall's menu's.It is chicken poped pie. I love this particuler food,but yall never have it,i would like to know if you would think about puting this on yall's next menu? It's a great food,not a fat food,and keep you healthy an kids at school need healthy things to eat becuase it help's then learn and do better in after school activities.Soo i ask yall to put this food on the menu.
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Ashlee Royal
8/17/2011 06:43:46 am
Dear , Lunch Ladies
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Karli Kozee
8/17/2011 11:05:29 am
Dear Cafeteria Staff,
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Karli Kozee
8/17/2011 11:06:47 am
Dear Cafeteria Staff,
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Bob Greenbaum
8/17/2011 12:51:38 pm
Dear Lunch Ladies,
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Christopher Kunkel
8/17/2011 01:14:05 pm
Dear:cafeteria staff
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Kiarra Williams
8/17/2011 01:21:59 pm
Dear Cafeteria Staff,
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Toby Martin
8/18/2011 07:47:08 am
Dear Lunch Room Staff,
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Allyssa Fail
8/18/2011 07:52:01 am
Dear Cafeteria staff,
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Kirsten Burgess
8/18/2011 08:17:58 am
Dear Cafeteria people,
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Anna Jerome
8/18/2011 08:34:57 am
Dear lunch people,
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Anslee Sewell
8/18/2011 08:38:35 am
Dear Caefeteria people,
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Ashlyn Cribbs
8/18/2011 09:32:39 am
To whom it may concern,
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Garrett Lews
8/18/2011 09:57:17 am
Hey. This is Garrett Lewis.I go to Effingham County middle school,and im writing the letter/email because I would like to talk about the school's lunch menu.Its not that yall dont serve my favorite food . Its that you dont serve it enough.my favorite food is tacos,and I do not understand why you wouldnt want to serve them more .tacos are the best. You have that soft/chunchy shell.And that flavorful meat, and best of all the taco sauce.plus the good thing about tacos are that you can pick what you want them . all the things you put on them are seperate. so you can do so many different combinations.and honestly your other foods aren't that good.I mean some are good but nothing beats tacos. I hope you take this under consideration. But if i dont see anymore taco days on the menu,I am willing to sue! And yes I im not lieing. I am that childish that i would sue for tacos.And i think if you have more taco day then it would help you to . here is one reason,people would want tacos and not bring luch from home. that means that they will buy it from the school,there for more money for the school.my secound reason is it would decrease the absentes,because people would want tacos instead of missing school. i recemend a taco thursday.And remember i am willing to sue . GO TACOS!!
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Macaila Brown
8/18/2011 10:08:42 am
Hey there, Effingham County Middle School lunch room ladies,
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Logan liverman
8/18/2011 10:09:22 am
I see you people do not have my favorite food on the lunch menu. It's very simple. Very easy to make. There is also many different kinds of it. Ramen noodles, quick easy and done.
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Ethan McDonald
8/18/2011 11:15:47 am
Dear lunch ladies,
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Blake Floyd
8/18/2011 11:22:10 am
Dear,lunch room staff
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Evyn Insalaco
8/18/2011 02:00:45 pm
Dear cafeteria,
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Nikolai Washkow
8/18/2011 10:29:52 pm
Dear lunch lady,
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jake hahn
8/19/2011 12:58:17 pm
Dear Lunch ladies,
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Noel Newton
8/21/2011 09:33:37 am
Dear Diary,
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Trent Zeigler
8/21/2011 11:07:31 am
Dear Journal,
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Logan Beasley
8/21/2011 01:07:26 pm
I'm on my way to america and these strange people board my ship they dont look dangerous but I find out other wise . They board the ship and look exhausted . I ask them what they desired from america they claim they are tresure hunters and believe black beard had a ship wreak on america and tresure was left behind in the ruins . they tell me how they spend 99 percent of their time sailing all over the world in search of achient artifacts . I listen intently as they tell their tales . it seems interesting . we are in the middle of the alantic ocean wen we hear a dreadful noise come from the haul of the ship . we go on top deck and notice chunks of ice everywhere and scraps along where the name of the ship is . "S.S Titanic". In panic we race up to the captains quaters and alarm the captain for he too heard the nosie . minutes pasted and every1 was on the deck tryin to get on a life boat . For the ship was sinking and it was only a matter of time before shed be gone . the strangers i met were frieghted we finally made it to a boat . we were the lucky ones . we cried for the lose of the womans husband i met . for they only took children and womem . we witnessed the lose of thousands of people . we watched nas the unsinkable ship sunk . I will always remeber that night . the lives lost . the pain and sufferin of people . And til this day i remember the story the man told me about the lost tresure of black beard the pirate .
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Trevor Usher
8/21/2011 10:18:21 pm
I am on board board the S.S. Usher, on my way to America. My crew and I have sailing for 13 weeks. We set sail from Paris, France. 'LAND HOE!' LAND HOE!' We have finally arrived. As we are unloading the ship, these people come out of the woods. They look kinda like indians. Thew wore different color coats. The coats were made of deer and bear skin. They had bow and arrows and spears. As we saw them we immedeently rose our riffels up at them. Then I yelled 'FIRL!'. As we fired they retreated to the woods. we ran out of ammunition and we had'nt hit anybody. They came out of the woods with their hands up. They didn't fire. We asked them what they wanted. They asked for food and water. We figered they didn't cause any harm. So we gave them food and water. They said we could live with them if we wanted. We said thanks, but we have to get back to France. They did'nt know where that was but they said ok. We left that afternoon and that was the last we saw of them.
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Allyssa Fail
8/22/2011 03:42:02 am
I was on the way back to America on a ship. I had just took a trip to England. One morning I woke up and there was a bunch of strange people on the ship. They looked like were from a different country. I asked one of them what they were doing. He kept on walking. They must speak another language because none of them could understand me. I kept on asking and asking till I found a guy who spoke some english. "What are you doing on this ship", I asked. "We are looking for the jewel", he explained, "What jewel?", I asked. "The jewel that is causing my country to go bankrupt. It is the last of its kind in our country we need one more", he explained. The only jewel that is on the ship is my birthstone necklace ,but I never take off. I was confused. Why would they want my necklace? I showed him the necklace. He got so excited. He said "Yes, yes. That's it. If you give it to me my people will leave you and your ship alone." I thought about it and decided it was the best thing to do. "Ok, I will give it to you, but take good care of it and use it for the right reason," I gave the necklace to him and the strange people left.
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Amanda Burgess
8/22/2011 06:59:44 am
Well I was on the way home from my trip to France, when I noticed two big,scary guys getting on the ship. They looked kinda like secret agents. They were tall,buff,wore all black,and looked about in their mid-thirties. Usally I wouldn't worry about silly things like this, but they kept watching me. Everywhere I went, they were there. They were really starting to freak me out. One night I was walking to my room, when I noticed yelling coming from another rooom.It sounded alwful. I wanted to see what was happening, so I walked over to the room and opened the door, and their was the two guys. One of them was holding a bat, while the other one had a crow bar. Thats when I relized they where bad. I just wanted to figure out how. I walked into my room and it was trashed. There was stuff thrown everywhere. Everything was broken, but on the wall in red paint was written 'Your next". I quickly ran out the room and right at my door waiting was the two guys. I ran down the hall. They chased me. I ran to the very back room and this man asked if i was scared. It seemed like a stupid question. I was being stalked and chased by two freaks,of course I was scared. I answered yes, and they said "dont be, your on Scare Tactics". I was so relived.It seems that my best friend had put me on it as a welcome back home surprise. We laughed about it for a while, and finally headed back to America.
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Hunter Jenkins
8/22/2011 09:32:04 am
I'm on my way to the America.Then these people with trashy cloths come on.They speak Ongese.Luckly I speak Ongese.When I was walkin on the ship; they ask their crew if they found "it." I told Captin Smith about it and he said to keep an eye on it.I walked behind them, and they went in to the basement.I asked them what are they doing down here, and they turned around.They looked at me and ran.I chased them around the buffet where two fat gaurds joined in.We chased them to an elevator.We had to run up three storys of stairs.The fat gaurds stoped half way.When I got here they when back down the elevator.So I ran all the way down and met the gaurds again.We chased them until the they jumped off the ship.We went in there room the look for evidence.All they wanted was chocolate cheese cake, toast, and poatatoes.So the next day we had toast for breakfast.Poatatoes for lunch and dinner.Then chocolate cheese cake for dessert.
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kayla christmas
8/22/2011 09:54:58 am
kayla christmas
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Patrick Begley
8/22/2011 11:17:00 am
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Patrick Begley
8/22/2011 11:40:15 am
I was on the S.S. Todles. We were on the way to America. We were going to start a new life. We were half way there when a black boat came up to the side of ours. Ten men boarded our ship.
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8/22/2011 10:42:27 pm
If people boarded the ship I was on, I woulden't bother. It's not my job to find out, unless........ nope, still not my probelm. I would enjoy myself while I can.
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Nira'l Young
8/23/2011 10:26:33 pm
I'm coming to America from Africa with loads of gold & blood diamonds. That were smuggled & fought over. I went there with my team of U.S. Navy Seals. We fought bravely, but only John (my best friend), Toni (my best friend's younger brother), and I survived. Then some people boarded our submarine. They weren't dangerous, but they wanted some of the gold. We called HQ & they told us that they were tortured & were kept hostage by the African military. So we took them back to HQ & they didn't get any gold, but they got $1,000 each and got to see their friends & family.
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kristina leigh jones
8/24/2011 09:37:28 am
I was on this ship when suddenly , these strange poeple boarded my ship . I didnt no what they wanted or why they were coming to America . They didnt seem dangerous , they seemed freindly and genourous so qwe let them board . Fred one of there people told me they were coming to america for a really rare bird . Some other guy that was on the ship when we took off said they wanted all the gold for there selves and was going to kill us to get to it . We finally heard the watch guy yell " land ho . " We all went onto the land we now call america and the unknown passengers all stood around and looked at us , one even tryed to take our ship . Where were they going and why ? Noone knew really what they were doing , everyone was scared to talk to them because we didnt no there culture or if we would affend them easily and start a fight . They started walking around they were looking for something , so i went over to them and i said " why did you want to come to
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Tori Defoe
8/25/2011 09:28:57 am
"Who are you?"said Captain Morgan.The three men smiled.The tallest one spoke first."I'm sorry we are lost and need some help."The tall man looked around with greedy eyes.The other two men shook their heads."Well I guess for now ,but as soon as we reach land you are all off,understand?"The tall man smiled,"Of course!"The captain frowned.He knew that the three men were up to no good.He went to one of his mates,"Look after them."The boy shook his unusually big head."Yes sir!"Night came quickly.Captain Morgan fell asleep easily,but as soon as he was in a deep sleep he heard loud noises.He heard voices!He ran to where the noises were coming from."The kitchen.I guess they wanted to sneak off with all my money!"He ran into the cold dark kitchen where he saw the three men."I cant believe it!"Said the tallest one."HE HAS PUDDING!"The captain was dumbfounded.(pudding?)"I thought you three wanted my money."They all laughted."Why heavens no. We wouldnt do anything like that!"The captain shouted, "Then tell me why you all where looking around my ship with greedy eyes!"The tallest one said bluntly,"We smelled your pudding."The captain smiled and said, "Oh."
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Jake Hahn
8/25/2011 11:11:04 am
Hey whats your names. said the captain. They answered Chuck, Finlay, and Mike. The captain showed them and had a man watch them. The next morning the captain went to go check on his guest. when he got to there the watch man was gone the door was open. the captain and his crew went searching for the guest. WHile everyone was still searching the captain went to maake sure his gold was still in its case. HE opened the case and the gold was gone. When he went to go outside to tell the crew. The crew was waiting for him. When he walked out the door. Chuck grapped him and tied him to the chair. Mike was asking him questions about the gold. The captain would not answer so the crew threw him over board.
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Dyshawn Akins
8/25/2011 12:53:55 pm
Welcome , im Captain Akins . One day when I was on ship going to Amercia . All of a sudden I felt the ship stopped . I looked out of the window and we were at the pier . While we were at the pier this married couple and their two kids boarded the ship . These people were kind of wierd . They didn't look like terrorists or anything . They were dressed like rich people . The whole family had on Polo Ralph Lauren from head-to-toe . In my head I was thinking ... Wow !! These people were like Jones . So , me , being the person that I am , I went to meet them . We talked for a while and then we decided to go to dinner together . We sat at the same table and we talked forever . After a while we found out that we were related to each other . What a surprise !! That next day we went to Myrtle Beach , South Carolina . We went to Myrtle Waves , the water park in Myrtle Beach . After that day we had to go our seperate ways . It was a farewell to my family that I had never met .
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Haley story
8/26/2011 11:06:03 am
To whom it may concern,
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Haley Story
8/26/2011 11:31:37 am
Well I live in Asia and every day I take a ferry to North America. One day, it was an ordinary day and then we made an unusual stop and these weird people boarded the ship. Noone knows who these people are and where they came from. Well , they boarded the ship and they seemed like nice people ,but they didn't come on to the deck where everyone else was standing the went down he hallways an looked in everyone's rooms and started to plunder through all of our stuff ,and noone liked that, so we asked them what they were doing and they just ignored us and kept plundering. And none of us liked that so we talked about it ,but noone knew who they were or what they were capable of doing ,or if they had any weapons on them.So we talked about it and we decided that we were gonna tell the captain.
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Macaila Brown
8/27/2011 11:33:52 am
Well, some people just boarded our ship and i dont know who they are or what they want...yet. All i know is that they are "normal" people during the day then at night they turn into living skeletons. Scary, right? Yeah, it definately scared me.
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caitlin ertzberger
8/30/2011 07:12:41 am
I think that the people may possibly be bad. The people are bad, because you cant judge a book bye its cover.Why would you let people you dont even no be around yhu i meen,who would do that because i know i wouldnt let them on. Well come on i meen would you let them on ur ship ?
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Roschell Pelote
9/2/2011 03:14:44 am
If i was on a ship i would freak out cause i want no what to do. I would be blowed and mad cause anything can happen while i was there by myself. SIKE!!!!!! I would likie to be put on a boat to see what is out there cuase while I in the 4th grade I wanted to get on a boat so bad that we went to river st. and i saw a nice boat. I would really like to get on a boat cause that seems like its nice so i will likw to get on a boat cuase i would like to eat and sleep alot. That is all on me. I think a boat will be cool to get on.
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patrick dewitt
10/4/2011 10:57:21 pm
I am looking for a stone it is very rare. We want it so we can sell it. It would help our family pay for the ship and our house if you find it tell me. The next day we are coming back and we still didnt find it and we got mad and walked away. So we tried a few weekes later and still nothing. A year later we paied off the boat but not the house and we are still trying to find it and we looked and we looked but no luck. And we are goning down a street and we bfound it under the bride it must of fell off the boat and they paied off the house.
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Essence Sanders
10/5/2011 03:50:28 am
Dear People that work in the lunch room ,
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