Your family has won a free three-day trip to any city in the United States. Write a letter to your family members explaining what city you think you should visit and why. Include specific reasons and examples to support your position.
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Your family has won a free three-day trip to any city in the United States. Write a letter to your family members explaining what city you think you should visit and why. Include specific reasons and examples to support your position.
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Trevor Usher
9/22/2011 10:22:48 pm
I would like to go to Sanfranisco, Calofornia. I would like to go for many reasons. I would like to go because it is right on the beach. Ive swam in the Alantic Ocean but never in the Pacific Ocean. I hear the water is really clear to. Now I dont have to worry about any sharks or jellyfish. I would also like to go because of the nice reastruants and hotels. I would also like to go for sports reasons. The Sanfranciso Giants play their home games in Sanfranciso. They play baseball. They won the world series in baseball a few years ago. I think thats what it is called in baseball. The most reason I would want to go to Sanfranciso is for theis NFL football team; thr Sanfranciso 49ers. They are my favorite football team. They are one of the five NFL teams who has won 5 Super-Bowls. The Steaers are the olny team ahead of them. The Stealers have won 6 Super-Bowls. I would love to watch them play. So now you know what city I would like to go to. Until next time.
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chandler grover
9/22/2011 11:37:14 pm
Iwould have to choose Lasvages,nuvadda for many different reasons number one is that there are alot of things to do there.You could be at the big restraunts they have their or maybe visit the hard rock hotel it would be asome the money ,cars,ceanios,and the muisc stores.It's all just one big fun machine desined like you want it to be and where ever you want it.You could even go play golf,baseball,basketball,or football.Well there you have it explianed the easyest way possiable.
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Evyn Insalaco
9/23/2011 12:44:49 am
Dear my wonderful family members,
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Logan Beasley
9/23/2011 05:15:21 am
Dear my wonder parent :),
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Roschell Pelote
9/23/2011 06:29:08 am
If me and my family won a trip to any city of the united states of America it would be florida. Why Florida? Because it was one of the places i went when i was 10 years old. Florida was fun that is like the best place. Fllorida is the nicest place to go and if that was an option i would go there.Florida has a big pool that your family can swim in.Florida is like really the best place you can go and have fun. Florida is were anyone can spend there vacation at.Florida is were you can enjoy yourself.Florida is were you can have time to yourself.Florida is really fun to have quilty time with your family to. Florida is were you can be self centered.Florida is like a place were most food.Florida is were you can swim every day if you want to.Florida is were you can meet new people.Florida is a fun place to and probly to other people to.Florida is were i would spend a vacation at. Florida is were me and my family will spend 3 nights at.
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emily cribbs
9/24/2011 03:13:00 am
IF MY FAMILY WON WE WOULD GO TO L.A.JUST BE CAUSE IT'S REALLY PRETTY AND HAS AWESOME CLOTHING STORES.I HAVE FAMILY THAT LIVES THERE AND THEY ARE MY AGE SO THEY KNOW ALL THE AWESOME PLACES.THE BEACHES ARE PRETTY TOO.PLUS ALL GOOD BANDS I LIKE GO THERE ALL THE TIME,AND MOST PEOPLE THAT ARE IN BANDS I LIKE LIVE THERE.I HATE COLD WEATHER SO THAT WOULD BE AN UP.MY MOM LIKES L.A. TO SO I WOULDN'T HAVE TO ARGUE WITH HER ABOUT IT.WE LIKE PLACES WHERE A LOT OF PEOPLE ARE BECAUSE WE LIKE TO BUT IN ON THEIR BUSINESS.I DON'T REALLY KNOW OTHER THAN THAT.MY LITTLE SISTER LIKES BEACHES WITH CLEAR WATER.SHE THINKS A SHARK IS GOING TO COME IN WITH THE WAVES AND EAT HER.MY DAD LIKES TO GO WAY OUT IN THE WATER BUT HE IS ALWAYS SCARED ABOUT SHARKS TOO.HE ALWAYS SAID HE WANTED TO GO TO ONE OF THE UNDER WATER CAVES.MY MOM WANTS TO GO TOO THE BROADWAY THING THERE SO.I WANT TO GO TO THE SKATE PARKS THERE BECAUSE THEY ARE AWESOME LOOKING TO TRY TO SKATEBOARD.MY MOM LIKES TO GO ON LINE AND CHECK OUT ALL THE FOOD PLACES.SHE SAYS THEY ARE ALL HIGHLY RATED. SAIRA,MY SISTER,LOVES SEA FOOD SO SHE WOULD LOVE IT.THAT'S WHERE WE WOULD GO.NOW IM GOING TO TRY TO CONVINCE MY MOM TO MOVE US TO L.A.
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Jeneva Faulk
9/24/2011 12:26:07 pm
If my family won a trip. If you ask me it would be New York so we can see every that at night time because it pretty. and we can learn more about 9/11 an see Family and have a good time. New York is have alot of Big places. If they wish too go too another place we can .
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Noel Newton
9/25/2011 03:33:06 am
Dear Mom and Shawn,
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Trent Zeigler
9/25/2011 09:45:41 am
Dear Family Members,
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Karli Kozee
9/25/2011 10:42:50 am
Dear Family,
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Quevon Spriggs
9/25/2011 12:19:43 pm
Dear Family,
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Brendan Haviland
9/26/2011 05:57:29 am
Dear Mom,
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Korey Guggino
9/26/2011 06:36:30 am
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Korey Guggino
9/26/2011 07:09:06 am
Dear, Mom
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Ryley Flathman
9/26/2011 07:15:33 am
Dear Daddy and girls,
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Haley Story
9/26/2011 07:35:38 am
Dear family members,
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Alex Gaston
9/26/2011 08:50:56 am
Also, it is close to California, so maybe I'llgo there to. Hey, maybe I'll got to all surrounding states, even though i probably won't. I might go gambling, even though I thik it's illegal to do that.
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Kirsten Burgess
9/26/2011 09:05:48 am
Dear family,
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Monjena Green
9/26/2011 09:07:26 am
Dear Family ,
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Amanda Burgess
9/26/2011 09:34:26 pm
Dear Family,
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Rashad Griffin
9/26/2011 11:25:09 pm
I would go to Las Vegas, Nevada, because it's the best place to find anything.You usually are going to go to the casino. I will always go to the casino,but that's just me. I love vegas. Usually what happens in Vegas stays in vegas. Thats why I want to go there.It will be to awesome.You can make alot of money up there. Las Vegas is also home to the Utah Jazz. Thats a basketball team if you didn't know. They are really good. There key player is Deron Williams.He's the point guard. What I'm saying is that Vegas is where I can stay for a long time.It won't be hard to find a hotel considering that it's got millions of them. There not bad to.I really hope that actually happens. I really do. If I do go to Vegas I will play card poker all night long. 24/7. I'm a stay up type of person. I will love going to Vegas.
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Allyssa Fail
9/27/2011 06:20:20 am
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Jo' Esha Lee
9/27/2011 06:30:52 am
If me and my family had won a 3 day trip anywhere in the United States. It would be New York.I would love to visit the big city for once.I would travel to the area where the Twin Towers were built. To see it in real life,then maybe I could get the real picture of the attack. I would then travel around the city to the park or something like that. Ill also go and try some of the food that's really not around in Ga. I would also shop and buy some of there famous outlets. I would also would like to know a little bit about New York's History,beacause all wedo is learn about Ga's History.Then I would leave and travel back home on the airplane and safe back home.That's pretty munch it.
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Allyssa Fail
9/27/2011 06:56:34 am
Dear family memebers,
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Minna Wamhoff
9/27/2011 06:57:54 am
I think we should go to New York City. We have family there,and there are landmarks. There are interesting places there, too.
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michaelmcdonald
9/27/2011 09:10:10 am
Dear family,
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Shannon Bragg
9/27/2011 10:30:29 am
Dear family,
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Donquyz Hamilton
9/27/2011 10:43:05 am
I would like to go to the Bahamas.I think the Bahamas would be a great get away trip.On the first day of the trip,we would go to the water park.I herd that they got a slide that go under water.It is one of the biggest slides in the world.A lot of people get on it and is afraid.To me thier crazy and insain.For the second day,we would take an road trip around the city.Then we will go to the movies.Then we come to the hotail,and take showers and juust chill.For the thired day we strart going home.We would talk in the car.Finaly,we would be home at last.
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Anthony Guggino
9/27/2011 11:22:55 am
Dear family,
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Alton Young
9/27/2011 12:45:37 pm
If my family won a three day trip we would choose to go to Dallas. The reason we would choose this city is because we love football and they say Dallas is the American team . The other reason would be that the Dallas Cowboys have a nice new stadium. The stadium has the world largest tv in the world. Dallas would also be a great place too visit because the texas stars. They are really nice. The texas stars are the lonely stars that are in the sky. Another reason that Dallas would be a great place to visit is because of there nice weather. In the fall Dallas has the best weather. The next reason my family would like to go to Dallas is because we hear that they have the best angus burgers in the world. That is what my family has heard from other people. Dallas is the home of the NBA championship team. Which was won by the Dallas Mavericks. Dallas is also a very good place too go watch cowboys bull ride. Dallas is known for it's wild westren history. Dallas has a zoo and a aquarium. They also have a big garden that my mom would probably make us go to. Hopefuly my mom and dad would take us to six flags. Six flags is near Dallas. Dallas has multiple college football teams. That is why my family and I would love too go too Dallas.
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Austin
9/28/2011 06:21:22 am
Dear family,
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Austin Marchant
9/28/2011 06:26:02 am
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garrett lewis
9/28/2011 07:12:11 am
Dear Mom,I would like to officially make my recommendation of where our family takes vacation. I think it should be to Aspen, Colorado. I like would love 3 days of cold weather and snow. You like to snowboard. I would like to improve my skills. We can take one day of lessons, and we could have 2 days of snowboarding. The mountains during the winter will be a neat sight. We saw on TV the cabins you can rent, which would be pretty neat. Aspen is also a vacation spot for many famous people, and you could get their autograph. You can also do some shopping to buy yourself something new. (10) In the late afternoons we could go sledding. Mom! Imagine all the bonding we can do.(11)Madison would also enjoy the people, shopping and playing in the snow. She would need more skiing lessons though. At night we can drink hot chocolate by the fire. I promise not to ignore you as much as I do at home. Also, if we play cards at night I will let you win.(16)Think about all of the good reasons I’ve given and choose Aspen for our next adventure. I think you will find that my reasons are very detailed and I have given our family time a lot of thought. Did I mention, I will do the dishes for 1 week if you choose Aspen.sincerly,
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Ken Oliver
9/28/2011 07:20:13 am
Dear family,
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Zaria Nixon
9/28/2011 07:46:15 am
Dear Family,
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Zaria Nixon
9/28/2011 08:02:52 am
Dear Family,
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logan liverman
9/28/2011 08:16:27 am
dear mom,
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John Brazell
9/28/2011 09:56:16 am
Hello I would like to thank you for choosing me for the winner.I know that my chances were slim but I guess they were good enough.When I go to Coney Island I would have a lot of fun on the rollercoasters.I know that it has good hotels.I also know that it attracts all kinds of amazing performers.I would lie to try some of the cotton andy because my grandmother went there and brought some back,it was good.I would like to try and ride all the rollercoasters in one day.It would be amazing to try and be a challenge.I would also like to try and et a cheap room so i could have more to spend at the amusementparks.
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Noah Parker
9/28/2011 10:27:21 am
Thank God that the family won a three-day trip. All of us have thought of great places to go but I really want to go to Hawaii. I bet that a lot of us want to go there too. I think that my mom will enjoy it the most though. I will now tell you all the reasons that I want to go there.
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Nicholas Bidwell
9/28/2011 10:41:09 am
Dear family, I think we should go to los Vegas Nevada. We should go there because it is a fun city. It has alot of things to do for the whole family. Mom and dad you guys can go to the casino. Me and my brother can go to the hard rock. Their are many more things too. They have alot of good hotels. Nice restaurants. Great tourist attractions , and many more places to go. It would be fun ,and since we have a free three day trip we should go. It would be a life experience. That would be fun ,and worth doing. You guys should really think about what I have said, and consider my idea. It would be really fun, so let me know how what you think, and tell me yes or no.
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Jason Roddenberry
9/28/2011 11:30:36 am
Dear, Mom
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Paige Simmons
9/28/2011 12:07:53 pm
Dear Family,
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Dyshawn Akins
9/28/2011 12:17:39 pm
Dear family members,
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Chris Kunkel
9/28/2011 12:49:09 pm
Dear:Family Members
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Kiyanna Pollard
9/28/2011 02:33:56 pm
Dear mom,
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patrick dewitt
9/28/2011 10:26:52 pm
i would like to go to detroit micighian cause its a really good place to go. It has a lot of stuff from good food to entermaint and a lot of exicment and a lot of people like this part if micighain and I do to. You can get boat rides. And the best of all you can get a lot of good stuff there like at the fair and you can also get this really awsome ride and a lot of people ride it every day. And plus my grandpa and grandma live there to and I only get to see them only on the fourth of July and somedays I really miss them and my grandpa makes all these coll sruff and when we went there last time he made a dune buggy and I got to drive it and it was really fast. If you go there you would really like it cause its really friendly there and you will get use to it if you do go. And thats my faviorte place to go to.
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Alexis Morgan
9/29/2011 06:16:38 am
Dear Daddy ,
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caitlin ertzberger
9/29/2011 06:16:45 am
TO whom it may concern
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Alyssa Livingston
9/29/2011 06:26:22 am
Dear Mom,
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A'maure Bing
9/29/2011 06:28:23 am
To my Mom,
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Abigail engel
9/29/2011 06:37:34 am
Dear Family,
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Alyssa Bejnarowicz
9/29/2011 08:12:38 am
Dear older siblings,
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Brandon Lee
9/29/2011 08:24:45 am
Dear family we have won a trip to any city in America.I suggest we should go to McMinnville,Oregon.It is a peaceful place.Also it is a small town so we could make new friends.Also the weather is great.
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ashlyn cribbs
9/29/2011 09:08:56 am
Dear Family,
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Jacob hahn
9/29/2011 09:34:59 am
Dear wonderful HAHN family,
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Kristain Shuman
9/29/2011 09:55:16 am
Hey Family since we have won the three day trip I would like to tell you where I think we should go. I think we should go to Hawaii. I think we should go to Hawaii because it has a beautiful ocean. It also has beautiful sandy beaches. I would also like to go there because I would like to get out of Georgia for a while. Its not really fun being in Georgia all the time. It would be fun because we could have so much fun getting to know each other better. We could also have a bunch of fun just spending time with each other. I think it would be nice to have fun and to get to know each other better. It would bring something good to us if you know what I mean. Hawaii just looks like so much fun. It is just so pretty and just like that. I think it would just be so much fun to have the family together. Hawaii is just a wonderful place to have family together. I would like to see the volcanoes there. I would also like to see how many languages they speak in Hawaii. I would also like to learn more about Hawaii. I would also like to know why Hawaii is named Hawaii. I think that going there and learning new things would be cool. I would also like to see how many island Hawaii has. And that is why I think we should go to Hawaii for our three day family trip. Love yalls
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Hannah Traynor
9/29/2011 10:15:14 am
Yo Family,
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Madelyn Aliffi
9/29/2011 11:21:51 am
Dear family,
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Essence Sanders
9/29/2011 11:29:34 am
Dear Fam ,
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Tori defoe
9/29/2011 11:37:45 am
Dear Mom and Dad,
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Patrick Begley
9/29/2011 11:57:24 am
Dear family,
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cheyenne howe
9/29/2011 12:19:50 pm
dear family members,
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Toby Martin
9/29/2011 12:26:44 pm
Dear Mom and Dad,
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Kiarra Williams
9/29/2011 12:36:45 pm
Dear Mom and Dad,
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Hunter Jenkins
9/29/2011 09:03:52 pm
Dear Mom and Dad,
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Nira'l Young
9/29/2011 10:19:34 pm
I would like to go to Rhode Island. Because I have family there. Plus I was born there, and mostly everybody there is my family member. On my dad's side of the family. I was born in Newport, Rhode Island. It is very cold in the winter with snow piling up to the doors, so people can't go to work. It might be the smallest state, but it looks like Savannah but even better. There are expensive cars there like Bentleys and Hummer 3's. The stores are cool, because there are stores like Ben & Jerry's (ice cream) & The Newport Creamery (ice cream). And that's why I would pick Rhode Island.
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Harrison Hall
9/29/2011 10:40:40 pm
The city I would like to go to is NYC, New York City. The main reason is so I can see time square and all the kmajor newspaper companies there is. Also, I would like to walk around the big attractions. The first attraction I would go see is Ripley's beleive it or not Time's Square then travel to the Radio City Music Hall to..... Well.... Listen to music of course. Then, just to say I did, take an helicopter Big Apple tour of New York. A dinner cruise around Manhattenn(Just for kicks). Then, all through the next day, I would learn everything about the Statue of liberty and ellis Island. On the final day, I would go to the World Trade Center memorial, look at all the names, see the fountains
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Brandon Hudson
9/30/2011 04:42:04 am
Dear Mom and Dad,
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kristina jones
9/30/2011 06:51:53 am
dear mom ,
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ski jenkins
10/1/2011 12:46:00 am
Dear mommy, I would like to go to Minnesota. I would like to got there so that I could go to the Mall Of America. It is very big and it is alot of fun from what Tamala told me. If we couldn't do that I would like to go to Alaska. I know that it would be could but I think it would be fun to play in the snow everyday. I love playing in the snow. I think that would be a good family vacation. I also woud like to got to China. i want to got here so that I could learn to speak Chinese. I also would like to wear chinese clothes everyday. I really want to go on a family vacation. I would like to go to Minnesotan, alaska, or China. If we go to Minnesota we can go to the Mall Of America. If we go to Alaska then we can play in the snow everyday. If we went to China then we could learn to speak in Chinese.So mama please choose one of these places to go for our vacation. We could have alot of fun in any of these places. I would be so happy. I love you mommy. please choose one of my choices.
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kayla christmas
10/2/2011 01:10:55 am
Daddy I thnik we should take our trip to Los Angelas California!
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Emily Haar
10/3/2011 01:40:23 pm
If I had to choose any city in the United States, I would pick Hollywood.I always wanted to go there. It would be really cool to see celebritys. I would get to see the hand prints in the cement. I always wanted to see that. I love movies, so Hollywood would be awesome. So, Mom, Dad, lets go! I really wanna go. It would be better then any other city in America. I already can't wait to go. This is a once in a lifetime oppurtnity. You can't just go to Hollywood everyday if you live on the Eastcoast. I also would like to meet movie directors. They are obviously everywhere! We might even get to go on set somewhere. You never know. Disneyland is close by to Hollywood. We could even go there! Think about it. Please say yes. I will never forget it.
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Bob Greenbaum
10/4/2011 07:50:36 am
If I had a ticket to go anywhere in the country for free three days I would like to go to New York City. I really would like to go because I never been there in my life ,and I wanted to try their famous New York pizza. I would like to take my family to the Empire State building and the Statue of Liberty. The third place I would like to go with them is on Ellis Island where my family went through to get into the United States in the 1930s. I also wanted to visit Broudway,the Lincoln Tunnel,Wall Steet,and the site where the World Trade center was, they call ground zero. I heard that the Subways there are cool to ride and not cheap. Those are some reasons why I would like to take my family to New York City.
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Trent Bridges
10/4/2011 08:00:08 am
Dear, Family
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Amaure bing
10/4/2011 11:20:54 pm
if my family won a trip to any were in the united states it would be paris because my been telling me how she want to to go to paris one day. im going to take her there because my all ways wanted to see the alfer tower she told me it beautiful at night and she wanted try new food. she said she wanted to taste the wine they have over there. she love some wine. she said she wanted to taste the snails with salt i think it naste but she willing to try it. i hope one day im going to save my money and take her to paris. life is to short to stay in effigham for the rest of you life and i hope my mom get her wish.
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Bobby Elijah
10/4/2011 11:25:43 pm
Dear, family I think we should go to Atlanta because there is famous people and nice hotels. we can go see the under water sea thing I don't know what it's call but I heard about it atlanta is the capital of Georga if we go to Atlanta we could have a whole lot of fun
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John Burke
10/4/2011 11:28:53 pm
Dear, family i know its a big choice in all,but ithink we should go to vegas.all my favorite rock bands are in vegas.iknow its known as sin city,but remember what happens in vegas stays in vegas.i want to go to vegas
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janika gray
10/5/2011 03:04:00 am
If my family had 3days anywhere it would be new york. because its a big city.i think we should really go there. because they have pretty lights everywere.its cool when you go in the summer time.and at night time just go and look at the pretty light in the dark blue sky.when you go there it would be alot to do and see but if you gho somewhere eles it might be lame. so thats why we should go to new york for 3 days.it would be really worth going to new york for 3 days.if any things better than new york you must be out your mind.ughhh im begging you.please say yes we going to newyork for 3 day.
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Arial Bowman
10/5/2011 03:16:09 am
Dear Family ,
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Jenny
10/5/2011 03:20:34 am
If my family won a free trip i would be so happy. i would call my friends and tell , and ask one of them if they would want to go with me and my family. it would be so fun . i would hope that we could go to the bahammas , hawii, or some where else special. but the most funner thing would be that im going with my family . and plus we never been on any vacation before . so i would think that it would be fun to go together. as a family we would all get to spend time with each other. and my new nephew would get to go some where . and this would also be his first vacation.
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shina blackmon :)
10/5/2011 03:20:39 am
Dear family,
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Ashlee Royal
10/5/2011 03:43:46 am
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Trent Bridges
10/12/2011 09:53:44 am
Dear Family,
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Jason Roddenberry
10/18/2011 06:31:44 am
If I had to choose any city in the United States, I would pick Hollywood.I always wanted to go there. It would be really cool to see celebritys. I would get to see the hand prints in the cement. I always wanted to see that. I love movies, so Hollywood would be awesome. So, Mom, Dad, lets go! I really wanna go. It would be better then any other city in America. I already can't wait to go. This is a once in a lifetime oppurtnity. You can't just go to Hollywood everyday if you live on the Eastcoast. I also would like to meet movie directors. They are obviously everywhere! We might even get to go on set somewhere. You never know. Disneyland is close by to Hollywood. We could even go there! Think about it. Please say yes. I will never forget it.
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