Imagine you wake up and you are no longer in your own bed at home. Instead you are freezing cold, lying on your back and gazing at the stars. Slowly you stand and notice you are on a large ocean liner; its funnels clear against the moonlight. You turn to read the name on one of the lifeboats and your heart lurches; 'HMS Titanic'. Describe what happens next.
*Respond to the prompt writing three paragraphs. You need to have specific details within your writing. Each paragraph should have at least 8 sentences in order to receive full credit.
Imagine you wake up and you are no longer in your own bed at home. Instead you are freezing cold, lying on your back and gazing at the stars. Slowly you stand and notice you are on a large ocean liner; its funnels clear against the moonlight. You turn to read the name on one of the lifeboats and your heart lurches; 'HMS Titanic'. Describe what happens next.
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Leeanne Donlon
3/1/2013 06:09:18 am
I wake up and find myself not in my own bed, I'm looking up at the stars and I am freezing coold. I look to what oceanliner I am on then my heart lurches: HMS Titanic! I get so freaked that I pay no attention to the other passengers on board and just start running around like a mad person. Soon I calm down and finnally ask a fellow sitting on a bench the time and date, he responds 12:30 am April 15th 1912. What he says replays in my mind, OMG it's about to sink! I just run around telling everyone to gather their families and get off the boat, most of them just look at me like I'm some kind of crazy lady but none of that matters to me because as far as I'm concerned I'm trying to save their lives.
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random
3/1/2013 06:10:24 am
God bless the people who lost their lives that dreadful night.
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Parker Dasher
3/2/2013 07:08:43 am
I wake up not in my bed but on a hard metal object. I sit up and look around. I'm not in my room but on a boat. I look around and find rows of life boats all around the boat. Closely inspecting one of them they say one single thing. 'HMS Titanic. I'm in trouble now.
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Hidayah Morell
3/3/2013 12:33:32 am
I wake up and I am no longer in your own bed at home. Instead I am freezing cold, lying on my back and gazing at the stars. Slowly I stand and notice that I am on a large ocean liner; its funnels clear against the moonlight. I instantly turn to read the name on one of the lifeboats and my heart lurches as I read, 'HMS Titanic'.
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Jaylen Wallace
3/3/2013 05:43:28 am
That night I went to bed after a tiring day at school. I went to sleep instantly, although normally it takes me a while to get to sleep. All of a sudden I woke and I realized I wasn't in my bed anymore. Not only that I wasn't even in my house anymore. I looked around and my heart sunk. I realized I was on the Titanic. I knew I should've stayed calm but I ran around in a panic.
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Evan Lastinger
3/3/2013 06:39:17 am
I wake up freezing cold, lying on my back and gazing at the stars. Slowly I stand up and notice I am on a large ocean liner; its funnels clear against the moonlight. I don't have any idea where I am at. I turn to look at what the life boat says. The life boat says, "HMS Titanic". I was freezing myself. I paddle over to the people that are in the water to see if they are alive. I didn't think they would be, but I looked anyway.
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Grace Liebl
3/3/2013 06:58:05 am
One day I had went to bed after a very long and tiring day at school. I went to sleep instently. When I open my eyes, Im not in my bed and I can see the sky. I stand up and relize Im on a large ocean liner. Then my heart stops. I see a lifeboat that says HMS Titantic. I start to freak out because I thought I would die knowing the story. I look around and everyone is calm and happy. This means that they must have just shipped off.
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cade zipperer
3/3/2013 09:04:00 am
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Blaze Burns
3/3/2013 12:24:33 pm
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Jeremy hicklen
3/4/2013 05:33:04 am
I wake up one night and see stars then i look to the side and i see the Titanic sitting there so i get up and see if its true there it was big and tall then I went to see if there was any thing left that was not in bad shape. so then I see something in the water when I looked it was a person dead so I turned around and looked and then seen a big map so when i looked at it said people started to cry so i went to see whats wrong and thats all it said then i looked around and found a door I went in to find a long path of stairs hen went down the path.
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Chevy Griner
3/4/2013 05:43:26 am
I woke up and no longer am I in my own bed at home. Instead I woke up freezing cold. Lying on my back and gazing at the stars. Slowly I stood up and noticed that I am on a large ocean liner; its funnels clear against the moonlight. I turned to read the name on one of the lifeboats and my heart lurches; 'HMS Titanic'. I couldn't believe it. Had I gone back in time?
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isabella Johnson : )
3/7/2013 05:56:35 am
I woke up and I was no longer in my own bed at home. Instead I was freezing cold, lying on my back and gazing at the stars. Slowly I stood and notice I was on a large ocean liner; its funnels clear against the moonlight. I turned to read the name on one of the lifeboats and my heart lurched. It read HMS Titanic. All I could think of was where is ever one. Where is my family?
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Marci Delcampo
3/4/2013 08:29:48 am
I'm laying in bed. I awaken and find myself freezing like the ice on an iceburg. I also realize, I'm not in my own bed, I'm gazing at the stars on an ocean liner deck. I slowly stand and turn around from the sea. I see a sign that reads "HMS Titanic." I think to myself, "This is a dream! It has to be! The Titanic sank years and years ago!!" Little did I know, that this was not a dream, but a nightmare.
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Jessica Jones
3/4/2013 09:18:40 am
When I read the name of the boat, it shocked me like a stun gun. How could I possibly be here? What kind of dream was I in? I knew the Titanic. And I knew something bad happened on this ship. I know that I knew what exactly it was before this moment. It was like a title wave had crashed into my memory and wiped away the information that I already knew of about the Titanic mess up.
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shakera
3/4/2013 09:48:10 pm
I wake up noticing im not in my bed. I stand up only to see HMS Titantic sign.I almost fall not beleiving im here in the tiantic ship.As I see people ,I get so scared to notice it was only a vision.although, I wasnt there, it felt like it
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ben jackson
3/5/2013 12:22:42 am
I wake up to relize that i am on the titanic . The boat that everbody said could not sink .The boat that i have learned and herad so many stories about that disater that happen and how many people died.My heart is now beating out of my chest its as if i can hear it.
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Dalton Mincey
3/5/2013 03:53:15 am
Last night i fell asleep in my bed, and when i woke up i was no longer in it. I was on my back looking at the stars. When i got up to see where i was, i was on an ocen liner, the Titanic. My stumach dropped. how did i get here? Many things are running through my mind. Will i survive the terrible sinking of the unsinkable ship?
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Jordan Robinson
3/5/2013 04:05:01 am
I wake up and am surprised because I'm looking at the stars. Then I realize that I'm colder than I've ever been in my life. I stand up and realize I'm on an oceanliner. I turn and look and run into a lifeboat hanging and it says HMS Titanic. At first I thought it was a dream. I try to wake myself up but i can't.
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Nicolas Newton
3/5/2013 05:42:20 am
I wake up and I find myself laying on the ocean and looking up at the stars in the sky. Then I stood up and I looked around and I saw the ocean and I looked on the side of the lifeboat and I was on the HMS Titanic. When I saw the word Titanic my heart was beating fast because I did not expect to be on the titanic. So what I did was ran around the ship because I thought I was on there by myself until I saw people in a little area on the ship and they was not scared like I was. They knew that the ship was going to sink but they were not going to do anything to try to stop the ship.
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Cory Gordon
3/5/2013 06:17:35 am
I feel like I am in a dream. But a terrible one. I have just woken up on the titanic! And what's makes it worse, is that I'm not dreaming. Somehow, someway, I went back in time 100 years during sleep. So the first thing I do is look for the captains quarters. I don find him there, but I do find him when I look in the drivers seat of the ship. I tell him to turn the ship and listen for the radio and watch the sea for signs from other ships for icebergs. I told him that there would no doubt be a crash and the ship will sink. He doesn't even start to believe me until someone came in and said they got a message saying that there was an iceberg ahead. He looked at me strangely, wondering what to say. He was obviously wondering how I would know that before the message was read. For some reason though, he did not change course. He was stubborn. I started to worry. I knew it would end my life horribly. So I went, stood on the front of the boat. And all of a sudden the boat shifts to the right. And I sigh in relief. I changed the course of history for that ship. I felt good.
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Chris Mathers
3/5/2013 06:36:25 am
I woke up and I was on an ocean liner. Everybody was dancing and having a good time. I danced for a little bit and I was having a good time too. I met everybody on the ship and they were very nice and proper. I met two people in particular which were Rose and Jack. Rose was about 17 to 18 years old. Jack was close to rose age about 19 to 20. They both talked like they were from England.
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Morgan Hild
3/5/2013 07:06:23 am
It was a cold drifty night and I had got up to get a drink but when I did I wasn't at my house. Whenever I looked up a sailor was staring and he told me to get my drunk bum up, but I wasn't even drunk. All the people were rushing to life boats and they wouldn't let any men on. It took thirty minutes for me to realize what was going on. The boat started tipping straight up and people were screaming.
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Anna Snooks
3/5/2013 09:16:40 am
Last night I fell asleep in my bed. When I woke up I was laying on a freezing cold ground staring at the stars. I have no idea how I got there. When I stood up and turned around I noticed a boat that said 'HMS Titanic'. I began to freak out but then I realized that wasn't going to help a thing. So I start to take action. That was the only way I was going to live. I also decided to try to save as many other lives as I could.
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David Oliver Covington
3/5/2013 10:10:11 am
Oh God, no. Oh no. No. NO! What am I doing, how did I end up here, did I travel through time?! All questions. Asked internally, from the human brain that is. The blood rushing, the air, suddenly a crisp sensation. That was the feeling I had when I woke up on the Titanic. Yes, the one that crashed. The one that killed. But i'm alive. Alive to tell the tale. And tell I shall.
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Chasidy Bryant
3/6/2013 04:19:56 am
If I woke up on a lear an I was cold I woulsbe scared out of my mind.However I wouldnt know what to do.But I problely would walk around to see what i can see.
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Ravian Johnson
3/6/2013 04:21:38 am
last night when I went to bed i was in my bed. So, im thinking that well since i am so cozy I would go have a good night sleep and have a good dream. So, I do and then I am realizing that it is time to wake up. Usually, there is someone to wake me up in the mornings so I waited to my mom, dad, or sisters come and awake me. That never happened so I just got up. Before, I got up ( my eyes were still closed) i was feeling kind of cold. So, I just reached for my coover, but all I kept feeling was ice. I thought it was a dream so I didn't pay it any mind. Then it started feeling a little more cold. Finally, I opened my eyes. When I did all I saw was a moon, and something that looked like the big dipper. I was lying on my back with no type of cover. Something in my head told me to look down, so when I did there was a paper saying " Here is something to write with, something to bend down on, and something to write on. I needed to have a science report on what I saw. So I just started jotting down things for my report. After I did, it was like I had written everything that needed to be written down because it all came to a blurr. Then I told myself that I was going to close my eyes and hopefully come to a sense of mind. I closed them and then I was back in my bad all warm and a little hot, but I survived. I looked down and I saw the paper that I had written and thought to myself oh that was real. So that is how my story went
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Wesley Fulcher
3/6/2013 05:25:56 am
I wake up and find myself not in my own bed, I'm looking up at the stars and I am freezing coold. I look to what oceanliner I am on then my heart lurches: HMS Titanic! I get so freaked that I pay no attention to the other passengers on board and just start running around like a mad person. Soon I calm down and finnally ask a fellow sitting on a bench the time and date, he responds 12:30 am April 15th 1912. What he says replays in my mind, OMG it's about to sink! I just run around telling everyone to gather their families and get off the boat, most of them just look at me like I'm some kind of crazy lady but none of that matters to me because as far as I'm concerned I'm trying to save their lives.
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Lorena Moreno
3/6/2013 05:51:06 am
I wake up freezing cold, lying on my back and gazing at the stars. Slowly I stand up and notice I am on a large ocean liner; its funnels clear against the moonlight. I don't have any idea where I am at. I turn to look at what the life boat says. The life boat says, "HMS Titanic". When I saw the word Titanic my heart was beating fast because I did not expect to be on the titanic.
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BRYCE YOUNG
3/6/2013 06:03:26 am
I wake up on a hard wood floor i look up and the sky is dark. i got up and looked around. i could smell a salty sea breeze. i looked around and noticed i was on a boat of some sort. like an ocean liner. there where men in suits and women in dresses. i walked up to a fancy looking lady and asked where i was.
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Dustin Briglin
3/6/2013 06:05:03 am
When I opened my eyes the first several moments where a blur. I don't know if it was from the cold or pure shock. All I know is when I woke up I was no longer laying on my bed. I wasn't even in my own room or any room for that matter. I was looking up at stars, the sound of water crashing on a hard surface. Everything was ok until I stood up and noticed the sign on the deck. HMS Titanic. "That was the ship that crashed into that island or something," I thought to myself.
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Lexie Monroe
3/6/2013 06:10:05 am
Today was a long day at school. I was soooo tired when I got home so I went to my room and went to sleep.Later on that night I heard a noise so I got up freezing my butt off, and said to my self this is not my bed. My bed is not hard and I am never this cold. It comes to find out I am laying on the floor of a titanic ship with stars above me.
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Breanna Mullins
3/6/2013 06:42:48 am
There I was in my night cloths. I was so cold I thought I was ice. When I seen the words "HMS Titanic" my heart dropped. The first thing I thought about was getting warm and telling the captiain the the ship was going to sink, but the again who would believe me? So I went inside and got warm and then I went to the captain!a room. I was sitting across from telling him how the ship was going to sink and the only thing he did was lagh and tell me that the ship could not sink. So there it was I had to take matters into my own hands.
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Hannah Mills
3/6/2013 07:15:41 am
I wake up and find myself not in my own bed, I'm looking up at the stars and I am freezing cold. I look to what oceanliner I am on then my heart lurches: HMS Titanic! It suddenly just clicked I could die. I look around for others and I see many people and I quickly yell get off the ship! They look at me frantically!
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Thomas Bowles
3/6/2013 07:25:24 am
I wake too get my covers because my toes are cold and all i fell is wood so i rub my eyes and then realize that im on a wooden life boat at sea and see that the Titanic is leaving so i just jump into the water as far as i can jump the start swimming as fast as possable to try and make it to the ship well i made it to the ship and i heard somebody say where is you ticket theni go to the back of the boat and sneak on board.
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Jamie brazell
3/6/2013 07:31:59 am
I wake up and find myself not in my own bed, I'm looking up at the stars and I am freezing coold. I look to what oceanliner I am on then my heart lurches: HMS Titanic! Suddendly i run to my best friends Chelsea and Taylor. I tell them that we need to evacuate the boat. They look at me weird. Then i said the boat hit an ice burg and we are sinking.
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Sarah Freeman
3/6/2013 08:57:57 am
It's cold, I have no clue were I am, and I'm all alone; something I had never thought would have come out of such a vacation. The last thing I can recall that happened was me boarding the "HMS Titanic". I was thrilled to be going on such an adventure, or as other people call it, a ship. All of that though, is all gone. Now my "adventure" is to find help. As I'm looking around I glance to see that I have somehow cut my leg. I now have a huge cut bleeding on my leg. But I have to put that aside and find some help.
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Alyssa Brinson
3/6/2013 09:40:04 am
If I woke up in a cold place and not in my own bed I think I will be very scared. I would wonder why I am here and how did I get here.
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Harley Brown
3/6/2013 09:50:01 am
I wake up not in my own bed and I'm freezing cold, lying on my back and gazing at the stars. I can hear hustle and bustle about the area. I take a deep breathe to slow my fussing heart, when I notice a puff of smoke blow in front of me; 'That came out of my mouth' I thought. Slowly I stand with my knees trembling and notice I am in a light dress that ends awkwardly in the middle of my shins with ruffles outlining the skirt and blouse with black heels on. I was on a large ocean liner; its funnels clear against the full moon that lights up the whole sky as if it were a spotlight for the world. I turn to read the name on one of the lifeboats and my heart lurches; 'HMS Titanic'. Suddenly I hear a call beyond the deck; "Heather! Heather, over hear!" The man walks up to me with a pipe in his mouth and talking like he had no choice but to keep it in his mouth. He looked like he didn't own much with an evergreen beret on his head and khakis with layers of shirts and a sweater under his dark brown jacket. I couldn't help but wrinkle my eyebrows at him because he was walking right in my direction calling out 'Heather!'; I don't know anybody named 'Heather'. "Where have you been dollface? Jim's been lookin' for ya'." Of all this confusion I forgot how cold it was until he put his coat around me for warmth. He put his arms around me along with the coat and we walked to what I recall as the Lower Deck Dining Room, but don't hold me to it. I didn't know him or anybody around me. I didn't know what else to do but to walk to whereever he was going. As we enetered I looked up and saw a crystal chandelier that gleamed as you walked by it. The ceiling was rimmed in spiraled gold about an inch wide. The whole room seemed like it had jumped out of a fairytale book from how vivid it was.
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Harley Brown
3/6/2013 09:53:19 am
(added to my last paragraph)
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Randy Nance
3/6/2013 10:27:46 am
I wake up with my back on the floor. Never a good place to wake up. My first thought is where is my bed?. Then I hear the ocean. that cant be the ocean though right? However, it was. I came to realize that I was on the titanic. Knowing what happened to the titanic, I knew I needed to get off quick. Or i would die. Never a good thing to do.
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Whitney Ricardo
3/6/2013 10:37:38 am
One Friday night, I found myself going I bed at a very early time. I didn't know why I got so tired so suddenly, but I ended up falling asleep at only 8 o'clock. After a very peaceful night of sleeping, I woke up, but I was NOT in my bed. I was on a hardwood floor. I was looking up at a sky full of stars, and I was freezing. I realized I was on a ship, and when I looked around to investigate further, I saw a lifeboat and I realized that I was on no other than the Titanic.
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Ryan Nance
3/6/2013 10:43:16 am
As I wake up, I begin to look around. Realizing I am not in my room, I frantically start to look for clues. While I look around, I see that I am on an ocean liner. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw lifeboats. Checking the name of the ocean liner on the lifeboats, I am shocked to read "HMS Titanic" Having heard about the Titanic in class, I remember my almost-sealed fate. Knowing what may happen any second, or day now, I began to think of what I could do to keep living. Maybe though, I might just live it up!
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patrick dawson
3/6/2013 09:31:25 pm
oh my god i think as my eyes slowly read agian and agian the name of the ship HMS TITANIC i start to panic i think i got to find the date i go up to the nearest person "Excuse me kind sir" as i say to this well dressed gentlemen "what day is today? why it is May,4 1912" he responds in a gental manner
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Matthew Barbour
3/6/2013 09:42:13 pm
I wake up and realize I'm cold and I don't know where im at. I see stars above me and i quickly get up and look at the ocean linear and it says "HMS Titanic". I get scared and wonder what happened. I asked somebody how I got onto the ship and they say you got onboard with a ticket. I think to myself how could this happen or what got me here.
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John Fort
3/6/2013 10:36:16 pm
I went to sleep instantly, although normally it takes me a while to get to sleep. All of a sudden I woke and I realized I wasn't in my bed anymore. Not only that I wasn't even in my house anymore. I looked around and my heart sunk. I realized I was on the Titanic. I knew I should've stayed calm but I ran around in a panic.
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Shannon Merritt
3/6/2013 11:45:10 pm
I woke up not in my bed but on a cold floor. I felt chills down my back as there was an breeze. I decided to look to my side then I saw the Titanic. I felt a little scared and a little relief. I just decided to sit there on the ground looking up in the skies.
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justin hinely
3/6/2013 11:51:50 pm
i wake up and it really cold and i dont know where i am. i look up and see a big smoke stack glowing in the moonlight. i can hear other people talking and i roll over and see im on a life boat and it says titantic. i nearly have a heart attack. i dont know what to do. its may 5 1912 and im scared. im not ready to die but i kinda have no choice. i have to think about what im doing.
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brantley emanuel
3/7/2013 12:58:15 am
I wake up and I find myself laying on the ocean and looking up at the stars in the sky. Then I stood up and I looked around and I saw the ocean and I looked on the side of the lifeboat and I was on the HMS Titanic. When I saw the word Titanic my heart was beating fast because I did not expect to be on the titanic. So what I did was ran around the ship because I thought I was on there by myself until I saw people in a little area on the ship and they was not scared like I was. They knew that the ship was going to sink but they were not going to do anything to try to stop the ship.
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angel harris
3/7/2013 06:15:05 am
I wake up and Im are no longer in my own bed at home. Instead I am are freezing cold, lying on my back and gazing at the stars. Slowly I stand and notice I am on a large ocean liner; its funnels clear against the moonlight.I turn to read the name on one of the lifeboats and my heart lurches; 'HMS Titanic'.I cant do anything but stare at what the lifeboat says,I am so in shock I feel as if I am about to cry...but dont.
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Taylor Biggers.!
3/7/2013 06:41:40 am
Well, I just woke up and I am not home. I try to ask somebody where I am but they just start running. I look around and then I see it. I'm on the Titanic. This is definitely not a good thing. I want to be home right now with my family. I don't want to be with a bunch of people that I don't know about to die.
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Taylor Biggers
3/7/2013 06:42:31 am
Well, I just woke up and I am not home. I try to ask somebody where I am but they just start running. I look around and then I see it. I'm on the Titanic. This is definitely not a good thing. I want to be home right now with my family. I don't want to be with a bunch of people that I don't know about to die.
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Aaron Castillo
3/7/2013 07:02:03 am
I wake up and its cold. For some reason im in my bed looking at the sky. I couldn't do this when I went to sleep last night so I don't know why I can do it now. I get up and I see the lifeboats. It says HMS Titanic. I know why I can see the sky now. But I do not want to be on this boat. Everybody is running around racing for a lifeboat but I don't think im going to be able to get on one.
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Abby Freyermuth
3/7/2013 07:04:59 am
What if you woke up one day and you were floating on your back in freezing cold water gazing at the stars? What will happen? You tell the story. Imagine and tell. You look at the lifeboat and it says HMS TITANIC. What will you do? Do the right thing don't panic. Think about who's with you. Why?
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Aaron Castillo
3/7/2013 07:05:48 am
I wake up and its cold. For some reason im in my bed looking at the sky. I couldn't do this when I went to sleep last night so I don't know why I can do it now. I get up and I see the lifeboats. It says HMS Titanic. I know why I can see the sky now. But I do not want to be on this boat. Everybody is running around racing for a lifeboat but I don't think im going to be able to get on one.
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Jordan Burnsed
3/7/2013 07:09:55 am
I once woke up cold and out of my bed. I found myself looking up at the stars. I turn over and I see "Titanic" written on the side. I realize that I'm now on a ship doomed for disaster.
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Destiny nease
3/7/2013 07:14:45 am
My heart skips a beat when i wake up and i'm not in my own bed. i'm brutally shivering from the cold. i look up and to my surprise there was a life boat and i almost passed out from what i saw. it read "Titanic HMS" my breathing became very heavy. i knew it couldn't be the "Titanic" like the one in those stories.That ship had sunk years ago. the ship known as "The Unsinkable Ship" i got half of my composure back and started to get up. i noticed that there were many many people on this ship. i knew i had to do something. i ran to this man that was sitting on a bench reading and i asked " what time it was and the date?" he said "12:30 April 15 ',1912." i knew i didn't have much time. i started breathing a lot more heavily and tried to find the captain. as i was trying to find him i couldn't help but notice how many few lifeboats there were. i tried to focus on finding the captain more than anything , when finally i spotted him on the top deck. i ran as fast as i could through the people saying sorry and excuse me the entire way. When i got to the captain and told him what would be happening in the next few minutes he looked at me as if i were crazy. and i'm not to sure i would blame him. here i am telling the captain of his own ship also known as the unsinkable ship that we were about to hit an iceberg. He told me to not worry. Everything would be alright. i asked him to please check the reports for any iceberg warnings and he said hesitantly "okay." we walked swiftly up to the room where people had what seemed to be headphones on. the captain asked the man in charge if he had gotten any iceberg warnings. the man replied back with a gasp yes we have. we have a huge iceberg and were heading straight for it. The captain looked at me n astonishment. i simply asked what we were going to do. the captain said we would just go around. I couldn't believe we weren't going to evacuate the ship. the captain went back to the deck and i knew something bad was going to happen. A few minutes passed and all chaos broke out. there was no order only panic. the ship had hit the iceberg and was sinking. The men on the ships were told they had to wait until all the women and children were off of the boat and in lifeboats. Everyone knew there wouldn't be enough lifeboats for everyone so the wealthiest women and children went first and the boats were packed full. i began running towards one of the life boats when i noticed a little girl was lost. so grabbed her and asked where her mom or dad might be and she pointed over the edge of the ship. i took the little girl and got onto one of the boats and waited as we were lowered down into the water. we paddled as hard as we could and as far as we could to get away from the ship because we knew that when the ship went down everything close to it would go down as well. As the ship went down we heard the screams of the unfortunate. the little girl had fallen asleep on my shoulder and everyone in the lifeboat began to pray. I yawned as i woke up relieved to be in my own bed and under my covers. i breathed a huge sigh and prayed for all the lives lost on that day . i got up out of bed and assumed it must have all had been a dream but what was odd was that my clothes were soaking wet from water.
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Chris Teaster
3/7/2013 07:17:56 am
As I woke up I found my self on a ocean liner in the middel of the night. I soon pull my self up to see a life boat named the Titanic! After overwhelming a littel bit I soon see a giant ship under it, looking at a scuba suit I put it on and went down to check it out myself.
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Abigail Russell
3/7/2013 07:28:56 am
I wake up on a hard surface and shivered. Wait, this can't be right. My bed is solf and Georgia is never this cold. I look up to see a beautiful starry night and i can hear the ocean. As i stand i relized that i was on a ship, but not just any ship the 'HMS Titanic'. Trying not to panic, i walk up to the first preson i see.
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Jared Holland
3/7/2013 08:17:16 am
I am on the Titantic. Which I unfortunately know that it will sink on May 5, 1912. I am freaking out! People are looking at me like I am crazy. I am not sure if it because I am running in circles. Perhaps it is because I am dressed in full camo. I know that I must come up with a plan. My survival instincts kick in.
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justin mcdonald
3/7/2013 08:52:50 am
woke up not in my bed but on a cold floor. I felt chills down my back as there was an breeze. I decided to look to my side then I saw the Titanic. I felt a little scared and a little relief. I just decided to sit there on the ground looking up in the skies. I then sit down and paddle towards a life boat and climb in. Even though I look like the Pillsbury dough boy I survive the sinking of the titantic.I explained the best and fastest i could. They all went into hyper mode to do as told. Having done all i can do, i walked out on to the deck and watched as the mountain of ice past by peacefully.
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Peyton Boyd
3/7/2013 09:34:35 am
I wake up with my back on the floor. Never a good place to wake up. My first thought is where is my bed?. Then I hear the ocean. that cant be the ocean though right? However, it was. I came to realize that I was on the titanic. Knowing what happened to the titanic, I knew I needed to get off quick. Or i would die. Never a good thing to do.
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ShaLora Marotz
3/7/2013 09:38:55 am
I came to my senses, awake, but too tired to open my eyes. I smacked my dry lips and rolled over, reaching for a blanket, but all I felt was a cold hard surface. 'Wood,' I thought. That didn't make any sense; the floor to my room was carpet. I forced myself to open my eyes and look around. The sky was clear, and the reflected light from the full moon illuminated my surroundings. I was on a large ship that looked like it would host some cruise to Hawaii. My eyes adjusted to the light and I noticed a sign that had two words written in fancy, golden, letters; "The Titanic".
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ShaLora Marotz
3/7/2013 10:06:56 am
My heart raced as I wondered what to do. I told my brain to think faster. (Listen up, this is a life or death situation, and if I die, you will too.) I heard panic: bells ringing, people screaming, and some crazy guy trying to sell shampoo. I looked around and found the edge of the ship. I ran, and jumped for it, praying I would survive.
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Paige Giles
3/7/2013 09:52:38 am
That's wierd... I remember being in my own bed at home. I hear ocean waves now and I'm freezing! What's happening to me? I get up to see what's going on and suddenly hear a loud boat horn. I'm on a large ship! I see the name on the side of a lifeboat just ahead. The name reads "HMS Titanic". I suddenly get a chill down my spine and start to panic!
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~Alexis Anderson
3/7/2013 09:52:39 am
Last night I fell asleep in my bed, and when I woke up I for sure wasn't there. I was on my back watching the stars. When I stood up to see where I was, I finale saw I was on an ocean liner, the Titanic. My stomach dropped. How did I get here? Many things are running through my mind not knowing if I was going to be able to survive the terrible sinking of this ship.
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Derion Anderson #11
3/7/2013 10:01:23 am
I wake up and I am no longer in your own bed at home. Instead I am freezing cold, lying on my back and gazing at the stars. Slowly I stand and notice that I am on a large ocean liner; its funnels clear against the moonlight. I instantly turn to read the name on one of the lifeboats and my heart lurches as I read, 'HMS Titanic'.
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Cody Phillips
3/7/2013 10:16:32 am
Through blurry vision I see the night sky. I hear this loud noise people screaming. It's freezing. I look over to see what it was. It was a huge ship, it was halfway down in the water sinking. I read the side it read "The Titanic".
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Coe Fulcher
3/7/2013 10:26:36 am
I woke up in the middle of the night and I realize that I am no longer in my own bed at home. Instead I am am gazing at the stars. Slowly I stand and notice I am on a large boat; its funnels clear against the moonlight. I turn to read the name on one of the lifeboats and my heart lurches; 'HMS Titanic'.
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CoLe Fulcher
3/7/2013 10:28:25 am
P.S. MY KEYBOARD SUCKS!!!!!!!
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Hunter Holloway
3/7/2013 10:29:40 am
Well, you know how we country folk are so, I started to get cold I had camouflage on and I had a shotgun in my hand, of course I was hunting but I did not remember what. I woke up and I said this is not the woods, I looked around and I saw I was on the titanic. I thought what in the world. well, of course I had a shotgun and people were looking at me like I was crazy and stupid. well, I know what's going to happen. so, I was going to the captains room. I get in there and he is asleep, I thought what in the worlds wrong with your stupid behine. so, I go around and all the crew members were not listing to me. they said I was drunk and did not know what I was doing with the shotgun. of course, one of them wanted to take the gun, you know how we country men are so I hit him with the but of the gun. I went back to the captains room and he was still asleep so I shot the gun in the air and let me tell you, I have never seen somebody move that fast, I told him where about to hit a iceberg. he got the ship turned just in time from being hit, he thanked me and then I woke up back in the woods.
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Phillip knight
3/7/2013 10:31:22 am
It was a late night again and I thought I would never fall asleep. I finally got to go to bed and passed out right there. I was so happy to be in a comfy warm bed. Nothing could ruin my happiness. Not even a dream. But I spoke to soon. I felt sick now. It felt like my head was moving because it was throbbing. I was cold and it felt like I was laying on the ground. I opened my eyes and found that I was on a boat in the middle of the ocean.
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Todd Beam
3/7/2013 10:44:10 am
There was a time when I woke up from a good night's of sleep, when I felt a cold rush of air blowing on me. I sit up and notice that I was on a boat. So, I got up and started to look around. All of a sudden, I see a sign that says "HMS Titanic." I was scared out of my mind. I better so find some warmer clothes and go and tell the captain about icebergs. I hope that this is not the last night before it sinks. I want to try some of this fancy food before something bad happens.
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McKenzie Ansel
3/7/2013 11:04:14 am
Suddenly, I was jerked awake. I finally opened my eyes. All I saw was a dark blue sky full of stars. I got up and looked around. I finally figured out I was on a ship. I went inside. I looked around in there, it was beautiful! It was very crowded! So, I decided to go back outside.
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Simone Jackson
3/7/2013 11:08:22 am
You know all those times you thought it was irrelevant to listen to the sinking of the Titanic story so many times in both history and english, well think agian. I woke up groggy-eyed and mid-morning cranky to the shining stars while I was aboard, what for it, the Titanic. As I wiped my eyes, I heard a loud unfriendly cracking sound. Just my timing, the Titanic had just hit the iceberg. I looked expectantly at for a jostled crowd of people to rush toward a life raft , but oddly enough, there wasn't one. I stood and looked around, and then I knew immediately why I hadn't seen or heard a stampede. I forgot that the rich had firsthand service to the life boats because there floors were above the ships deck. It sickened me because I knew that innocent people who were just short a couple of dollars would die because of the cruise liner's ingnorant policies. I heard a cry then a scream and ran for the other side of the ship.
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Chandler Young
3/7/2013 11:12:34 am
When I had went to bed . Then had woke up and had noticed that I was gazing at the sky and it was freezing too . While gazing I had also seen strange tall funnels . I had stood up in a panic then ihad looked over at the boats and the name that was discovered on their was the HMS titanic . I had started to run around in a panic . I had said to myself " no no no this has to be a dream , O no not me !" So I had stood calm and had started to march into the banquet room . Everyone had on fancy clothes , I had felt odd because i had on modern day apparel and others had on dresses and ball room clothing .
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Hannah Smoak.
3/7/2013 11:17:21 am
As i woke up on a cold icy floor I knew i wasn't in my bed. Confused i looked from left to right I realized I was on the Titanic. I started freaking out. I was astonished and didn't know what to do.
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Kelvin Davis
3/7/2013 08:16:19 pm
I wake up in the middle of the night noticing Iam not in my bed , then when I really woke up I said OMG I'am on the Titanic. I look at my whach and it is 12;02. I look outside I see a huge glacer we are heading straight at it. At first I diden't thank much and then I said were going to crash ; so I ran to the captain and said captain captain were heading for a glacer were going to crash. The captain said are you sure boy are you sure. And I said yes and he said prepare for a crash.
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Nick Bingham
3/7/2013 08:47:26 pm
As i sit in this little boat cramp with people i don't know, we all hope to see another day. we are all freezing cold and huddling up close to each other to get body heat. we looked in the small raft for a compartment that could have food, water, our a blanket. we searched and searched but found nothing.
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Martha Paramo
3/11/2013 07:04:10 am
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Precious Collins
3/12/2013 05:20:13 am
Guess what? the weirdest thing happened to me the other day.Ok i was laying in bed,And I had the strangest dream ! I was lying down on a cold,freezing ground.Although the wind was blowing,I didn't think I could survive in that type of weather.
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Monique Overstreet
3/12/2013 12:13:53 pm
After I went to bed, I felt Icold breeze on me.I open my eyes and I turned my neck and I saw a life boat say HMS Titanic.I got up and started lurking for people around the boat for help.A lot of the people were sleep in their rooms.Suddenly I heard someone coming ,so I hide in the jantors closet for a minute till he left.I left the closet to go find a room that was getting clean and had no reserved people in it to go sleep.I sneeked and tooked the key from the cleaning lady,and went to go lay down.I went to sleep so I can get help ,so i can get off the ship.
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Chelsea McEwen
3/13/2013 05:23:29 am
If I woke up to that i would probably a heart attack. It would freak me out. I would try to find somebody that was warm and get out of the cold. I would try to find somebody that I know. If I find somebody I know then we can try to build a fire. The only thing about building a fire is it looked like it was gonna rain.
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BROOKE D. (:
3/15/2013 12:51:26 am
One morning i wake up, and realize im not in my comfy cozy bed. Instead im on a floor looking up at stars and freezing cold. I slowly stand up and look over my shoulder, but all i see is fog. As the fog slowly clears away i find myself on the HMS Titanic. I begin to walk, but my feet sleep from behind i notice im face to face with a floor full of water. some geneorus man comes and helps me up saying i need to abandoned ship. I see thousands of people on the life boats, as i get up the man helps me into a life boat. we slowly drift away leaving the boat sinking under really quickly. I cant imagine how the peopel felt who were still left there. Thats what happened when i was aboard on the HMS titanic.
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Mya Wheeler
3/16/2013 06:56:36 am
I froze to the spot. 'The Titanic? I'm on the TITANIC?!' All other sounds died in my ears while my conscious screamed at me to move my legs ,to run like all the other people that were on the deck. People were screaming, knocking into each other. What happened i was supposed to be at home asleep... SAFE.
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Darius Garvin
4/24/2013 06:48:55 am
I wake up not in my bed but on a piece of wood. I sit up and look around I am not in my room and not in my house but i was on a boat. I look around and find alot of life boats all around the boat. Inspecting one of them they say one it HMS Titanic. Now I know im in real trouble.
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blake richardson
4/30/2013 07:47:52 am
"Ohh noo man over board" i hear as the captian thows a life preserver out."Help! Help!"yelled the man in the tuxido.I didnt knowwhat to think I was asleep in my room last night what could this mean.I think my brain is playing tricks on mewhen i look over and spot S.S. TITANIC on the side of this funnel.It was unrealisticly impossable I could have gone back in time?No way i was dreaming i fealt the sea's salt water splash on my face.I think to myself maybe i can stay hear but then i remember that this unsinkable boat will hit an iceburg.
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